hey it’s Evan I’m doing another one of my Fiverr gigs where I am reviewing
my Fiverr gigs where I am reviewing
my Fiverr gigs where I am reviewing somebody’s website and today I’m looking
somebody’s website and today I’m looking
somebody’s website and today I’m looking at Charles’s website and we are looking
at Charles’s website and we are looking
at Charles’s website and we are looking at credit card debt slavery com so I
at credit card debt slavery com so I
at credit card debt slavery com so I load it up and give Charles some of my
load it up and give Charles some of my
load it up and give Charles some of my feedback on what to do so here’s his
feedback on what to do so here’s his
feedback on what to do so here’s his website this is the homepage I guess at
website this is the homepage I guess at
website this is the homepage I guess at first glance I kind of get what you do
first glance I kind of get what you do
first glance I kind of get what you do so credit card debt slavery helping
so credit card debt slavery helping
so credit card debt slavery helping those in debt to become debt free so
those in debt to become debt free so
those in debt to become debt free so this is this is great and as it explains
this is this is great and as it explains
this is this is great and as it explains what you do I know why I’m coming to
what you do I know why I’m coming to
what you do I know why I’m coming to this website I know what you can
this website I know what you can
this website I know what you can potentially offer me here I’d love to
potentially offer me here I’d love to
potentially offer me here I’d love to see a couple things on this homepage
see a couple things on this homepage
see a couple things on this homepage okay first of all I’d love to see an
okay first of all I’d love to see an
okay first of all I’d love to see an opinion that you stand for okay so
opinion that you stand for okay so
opinion that you stand for okay so what’s wrong with the market right now
what’s wrong with the market right now
what’s wrong with the market right now and make me feel something make me feel
and make me feel something make me feel
and make me feel something make me feel a connection to you if you’re telling
a connection to you if you’re telling
a connection to you if you’re telling your story or if you’re giving me a
your story or if you’re giving me a
your story or if you’re giving me a strong opinion you’re telling me what’s
strong opinion you’re telling me what’s
strong opinion you’re telling me what’s broken put some more content on this
broken put some more content on this
broken put some more content on this page beyond just this one tagline you’re
page beyond just this one tagline you’re
page beyond just this one tagline you’re asking I think here somewhere about do
asking I think here somewhere about do
asking I think here somewhere about do you feel I’ve optimize my blog for the
you feel I’ve optimize my blog for the
you feel I’ve optimize my blog for the keyword phrase credit card debt slavery
keyword phrase credit card debt slavery
keyword phrase credit card debt slavery okay it’s in your title tag it’s in your
okay it’s in your title tag it’s in your
okay it’s in your title tag it’s in your you know URL you put it here but unique
you know URL you put it here but unique
you know URL you put it here but unique content you want to have at least 500
content you want to have at least 500
content you want to have at least 500 words of content on each page and
words of content on each page and
words of content on each page and there’s not a lot of content on this
there’s not a lot of content on this
there’s not a lot of content on this page so you could do a double whammy of
page so you could do a double whammy of
page so you could do a double whammy of adding content not just for search
adding content not just for search
adding content not just for search engines but also for people who are
engines but also for people who are
engines but also for people who are visiting your site to feel a connection
visiting your site to feel a connection
visiting your site to feel a connection here to feel like yeah this guy
here to feel like yeah this guy
here to feel like yeah this guy understands my story and I want to learn
understands my story and I want to learn
understands my story and I want to learn more about him you could definitely use
more about him you could definitely use
more about him you could definitely use a design left to so you might want to
a design left to so you might want to
a design left to so you might want to look at this looks like it’s a wordpress
look at this looks like it’s a wordpress
look at this looks like it’s a wordpress theme so yeah we r / seeing we could
theme so yeah we r / seeing we could
theme so yeah we r / seeing we could look at a premium wordpress theme you
look at a premium wordpress theme you
look at a premium wordpress theme you can look at some other free ones you can
can look at some other free ones you can
can look at some other free ones you can maybe spend 50 bucks to get a better
maybe spend 50 bucks to get a better
maybe spend 50 bucks to get a better theme or go to you know get a nice logo
theme or go to you know get a nice logo
theme or go to you know get a nice logo made for yourself you can look at
made for yourself you can look at
made for yourself you can look at websites like 99 designs it doesn’t have
websites like 99 designs it doesn’t have
websites like 99 designs it doesn’t have to cost you a lot of money and it will
to cost you a lot of money and it will
to cost you a lot of money and it will make it look a little nicer right now it
make it look a little nicer right now it
make it look a little nicer right now it looks a little bit homemade and I
looks a little bit homemade and I
looks a little bit homemade and I definitely want to improve the layout
definitely want to improve the layout
definitely want to improve the layout and the design of the site I’m looking
and the design of the site I’m looking
and the design of the site I’m looking at all these pictures that are floating
at all these pictures that are floating
at all these pictures that are floating by here and some of them are like I
by here and some of them are like I
by here and some of them are like I can’t click on them right it’s kind of
can’t click on them right it’s kind of
can’t click on them right it’s kind of confusing and some of them aren’t the
confusing and some of them aren’t the
confusing and some of them aren’t the greatest quality i saw one back here
greatest quality i saw one back here
greatest quality i saw one back here that had logos across the top like this
that had logos across the top like this
that had logos across the top like this one here right you can tell it’s a stock
one here right you can tell it’s a stock
one here right you can tell it’s a stock photo you know you want to improve this
photo you know you want to improve this
photo you know you want to improve this and make
and make
and make it’s meaningful to the site but I’m
it’s meaningful to the site but I’m
it’s meaningful to the site but I’m confused not usually I can click on this
confused not usually I can click on this
confused not usually I can click on this and he should lead to two blog posts and
and he should lead to two blog posts and
and he should lead to two blog posts and tell me more but what you’re up to the
tell me more but what you’re up to the
tell me more but what you’re up to the credit doctor I’m assuming that’s what
credit doctor I’m assuming that’s what
credit doctor I’m assuming that’s what you are are called I don’t know what I
you are are called I don’t know what I
you are are called I don’t know what I click and click on this and see what I
click and click on this and see what I
click and click on this and see what I get if you’re calling yourself a credit
get if you’re calling yourself a credit
get if you’re calling yourself a credit doctor I don’t know I’d love to see more
doctor I don’t know I’d love to see more
doctor I don’t know I’d love to see more about you on here I’d love to see some
about you on here I’d love to see some
about you on here I’d love to see some testimonials people who have loved your
testimonials people who have loved your
testimonials people who have loved your content but let’s dig down a little
content but let’s dig down a little
content but let’s dig down a little deeper and see what time we can find so
deeper and see what time we can find so
deeper and see what time we can find so I’m going to click on one of these one
I’m going to click on one of these one
I’m going to click on one of these one of these links here they seem to go to
of these links here they seem to go to
of these links here they seem to go to PDF so I’ll click on recent posts about
PDF so I’ll click on recent posts about
PDF so I’ll click on recent posts about me what’s on your mind and see what pops
me what’s on your mind and see what pops
me what’s on your mind and see what pops up so the first one was a credit dr.
up so the first one was a credit dr.
up so the first one was a credit dr. link so this here looks like it goes to
link so this here looks like it goes to
link so this here looks like it goes to a sales letter page so this is this is
a sales letter page so this is this is
a sales letter page so this is this is you know let’s look at like an affiliate
you know let’s look at like an affiliate
you know let’s look at like an affiliate page so you’re trying to promote this
page so you’re trying to promote this
page so you’re trying to promote this product maybe it comes from clickbank or
product maybe it comes from clickbank or
product maybe it comes from clickbank or whatever it is again you know if you
whatever it is again you know if you
whatever it is again you know if you want to sell this product you got to
want to sell this product you got to
want to sell this product you got to tell me why this is important don’t rely
tell me why this is important don’t rely
tell me why this is important don’t rely just on this this woman and the sales
just on this this woman and the sales
just on this this woman and the sales that are paid you want to drive people
that are paid you want to drive people
that are paid you want to drive people to this page and you got to tell me why
to this page and you got to tell me why
to this page and you got to tell me why that product is great if you used it if
that product is great if you used it if
that product is great if you used it if you had experience with it the biggest
you had experience with it the biggest
you had experience with it the biggest problem with people are just promoting
problem with people are just promoting
problem with people are just promoting affiliate products is they have no
affiliate products is they have no
affiliate products is they have no personal connection to what their salad
personal connection to what their salad
personal connection to what their salad and so it’s not credible right if it’s
and so it’s not credible right if it’s
and so it’s not credible right if it’s your own product it’s a different story
your own product it’s a different story
your own product it’s a different story but if you’re recommending somebody’s
but if you’re recommending somebody’s
but if you’re recommending somebody’s product if you’re selling it you have to
product if you’re selling it you have to
product if you’re selling it you have to have a personal attachment to it a
have a personal attachment to it a
have a personal attachment to it a personal story and take me on a journey
personal story and take me on a journey
personal story and take me on a journey to explain where you were and why this
to explain where you were and why this
to explain where you were and why this company helped solve your problem so
company helped solve your problem so
company helped solve your problem so that goes to a landing page which is it
that goes to a landing page which is it
that goes to a landing page which is it gives you a nice annoying pop-up on the
gives you a nice annoying pop-up on the
gives you a nice annoying pop-up on the way out so this is one of the reports
way out so this is one of the reports
way out so this is one of the reports here 13 credit myths 13 credit miss so
here 13 credit myths 13 credit miss so
here 13 credit myths 13 credit miss so this looks nicely designed if you have
this looks nicely designed if you have
this looks nicely designed if you have bad credit there’s nothing you can do
bad credit there’s nothing you can do
bad credit there’s nothing you can do repair dr. credit repair doctor what was
repair dr. credit repair doctor what was
repair dr. credit repair doctor what was on here the credit doctor so credit dr.
on here the credit doctor so credit dr.
on here the credit doctor so credit dr. credit repair doctor we’re not quite
credit repair doctor we’re not quite
credit repair doctor we’re not quite using the same terminology this is great
using the same terminology this is great
using the same terminology this is great but it leads to another website here so
but it leads to another website here so
but it leads to another website here so I guess again it’s a sales tool to try
I guess again it’s a sales tool to try
I guess again it’s a sales tool to try to get people to that page I’d love to
to get people to that page I’d love to
to get people to that page I’d love to see you creating this stuff so not not
see you creating this stuff so not not
see you creating this stuff so not not the company but you create your own
the company but you create your own
the company but you create your own stuff with your picture on it and you
stuff with your picture on it and you
stuff with your picture on it and you have your 13 this or whatever it is I
have your 13 this or whatever it is I
have your 13 this or whatever it is I love to see you build up yourself as an
love to see you build up yourself as an
love to see you build up yourself as an authority so people come in they try
authority so people come in they try
authority so people come in they try you and they they want you to help them
you and they they want you to help them
you and they they want you to help them get out of whatever problem they’re
get out of whatever problem they’re
get out of whatever problem they’re facing with their debt right now and if
facing with their debt right now and if
facing with their debt right now and if that works if you can build up a
that works if you can build up a
that works if you can build up a following if you can get people excited
following if you can get people excited
following if you can get people excited by what you’re offering then you can
by what you’re offering then you can
by what you’re offering then you can sell any kind of product you can sell
sell any kind of product you can sell
sell any kind of product you can sell this one clickbank product or a whole
this one clickbank product or a whole
this one clickbank product or a whole host of others that you personally
host of others that you personally
host of others that you personally believe in because you have an oral
believe in because you have an oral
believe in because you have an oral audience you built up a relationship
audience you built up a relationship
audience you built up a relationship with them recent posts so i guess
with them recent posts so i guess
with them recent posts so i guess there’s nothing here yet this looks like
there’s nothing here yet this looks like
there’s nothing here yet this looks like just a picture okay so I mean so you got
just a picture okay so I mean so you got
just a picture okay so I mean so you got to add some content here nothing has
to add some content here nothing has
to add some content here nothing has been put up yet but it’s fine about me
been put up yet but it’s fine about me
been put up yet but it’s fine about me hello and welcome I’m Charles mcduffie
hello and welcome I’m Charles mcduffie
hello and welcome I’m Charles mcduffie all right I third this blog because I
all right I third this blog because I
all right I third this blog because I can identify with those who are in over
can identify with those who are in over
can identify with those who are in over their heads I filed a chapter 7
their heads I filed a chapter 7
their heads I filed a chapter 7 bankruptcy because I run over thirty
bankruptcy because I run over thirty
bankruptcy because I run over thirty thousand dollars in credit card debt wow
thousand dollars in credit card debt wow
thousand dollars in credit card debt wow I feel the bankruptcy was the best way
I feel the bankruptcy was the best way
I feel the bankruptcy was the best way for me to get my life back creditors to
for me to get my life back creditors to
for me to get my life back creditors to stop hounding me to death so this is
stop hounding me to death so this is
stop hounding me to death so this is great this is this is what I want to see
great this is this is what I want to see
great this is this is what I want to see more of an and congratulations to you
more of an and congratulations to you
more of an and congratulations to you because a lot of people who are just
because a lot of people who are just
because a lot of people who are just promoting affiliate products they never
promoting affiliate products they never
promoting affiliate products they never even tell their story at all what I’d
even tell their story at all what I’d
even tell their story at all what I’d love to see here is a higher quality
love to see here is a higher quality
love to see here is a higher quality picture here not in terms of your your
picture here not in terms of your your
picture here not in terms of your your look but just the picture is pixelated
look but just the picture is pixelated
look but just the picture is pixelated and hard to see and fill this out more
and hard to see and fill this out more
and hard to see and fill this out more like take me on a journey make me know
like take me on a journey make me know
like take me on a journey make me know what you felt and what happened and and
what you felt and what happened and and
what you felt and what happened and and how you got out of it right it says this
how you got out of it right it says this
how you got out of it right it says this blog is dedicated to helping those who
blog is dedicated to helping those who
blog is dedicated to helping those who are in debt break the chains what
are in debt break the chains what
are in debt break the chains what happened to you what happened after your
happened to you what happened after your
happened to you what happened after your bankruptcy and and let me know how you
bankruptcy and and let me know how you
bankruptcy and and let me know how you broke free and and more of your mission
broke free and and more of your mission
broke free and and more of your mission like this this is a powerful page so
like this this is a powerful page so
like this this is a powerful page so that people believe in your message on
that people believe in your message on
that people believe in your message on here if they get tied to you personally
here if they get tied to you personally
here if they get tied to you personally then they’ll read everything that you
then they’ll read everything that you
then they’ll read everything that you put out and they’ll say Charles knows
put out and they’ll say Charles knows
put out and they’ll say Charles knows what I’m feeling and I’m going to trust
what I’m feeling and I’m going to trust
what I’m feeling and I’m going to trust in him to take me out of this and that’s
in him to take me out of this and that’s
in him to take me out of this and that’s what you want you want to build yourself
what you want you want to build yourself
what you want you want to build yourself up as an authority that people will
up as an authority that people will
up as an authority that people will listen to and and if you recommend a
listen to and and if you recommend a
listen to and and if you recommend a product you want them to buy it where it
product you want them to buy it where it
product you want them to buy it where it is your personal recommendation and not
is your personal recommendation and not
is your personal recommendation and not just that one product but tons on going
just that one product but tons on going
just that one product but tons on going I love to see some kind of newsletter
I love to see some kind of newsletter
I love to see some kind of newsletter here to write the only thing that they
here to write the only thing that they
here to write the only thing that they can do is buy your product or contact
can do is buy your product or contact
can do is buy your product or contact you I love to see some kind of way for
you I love to see some kind of way for
you I love to see some kind of way for them to get content on an ongoing basis
them to get content on an ongoing basis
them to get content on an ongoing basis so you’re kind of dating them before
so you’re kind of dating them before
so you’re kind of dating them before you’re asking them to get married and
you’re asking them to get married and
you’re asking them to get married and take an action with you sign up for your
take an action with you sign up for your
take an action with you sign up for your newsletter get some more information and
newsletter get some more information and
newsletter get some more information and then you can follow up with them with
then you can follow up with them with
then you can follow up with them with great content and then also product
great content and then also product
great content and then also product sales afterwards but i love this page
sales afterwards but i love this page
sales afterwards but i love this page you got to really blow this one up and
you got to really blow this one up and
you got to really blow this one up and then what’s on your mind so this is
then what’s on your mind so this is
then what’s on your mind so this is great you can ask the question maybe you
great you can ask the question maybe you
great you can ask the question maybe you do like a video response I don’t see any
do like a video response I don’t see any
do like a video response I don’t see any social media links anywhere here but
social media links anywhere here but
social media links anywhere here but that’s great do you have the option for
that’s great do you have the option for
that’s great do you have the option for people to write into you so I guess
people to write into you so I guess
people to write into you so I guess summarizing here it’s a great has great
summarizing here it’s a great has great
summarizing here it’s a great has great potential again the biggest challenge
potential again the biggest challenge
potential again the biggest challenge with a lot of these affiliate websites
with a lot of these affiliate websites
with a lot of these affiliate websites is there’s no personal story no personal
is there’s no personal story no personal
is there’s no personal story no personal connection and you actually have a story
connection and you actually have a story
connection and you actually have a story here this isn’t just hey I’m trying to
here this isn’t just hey I’m trying to
here this isn’t just hey I’m trying to make money off of people who are in debt
make money off of people who are in debt
make money off of people who are in debt you’ve been there you understand it and
you’ve been there you understand it and
you’ve been there you understand it and I didn’t see any of that until I really
I didn’t see any of that until I really
I didn’t see any of that until I really got to the about me page so I put that
got to the about me page so I put that
got to the about me page so I put that front and center have something on the
front and center have something on the
front and center have something on the homepage have your face have a little
homepage have your face have a little
homepage have your face have a little clip about your store where they can
clip about your store where they can
clip about your store where they can click more on to get to the about page
click more on to get to the about page
click more on to get to the about page really make me feel something make me
really make me feel something make me
really make me feel something make me feel that you really understand me
feel that you really understand me
feel that you really understand me explain how you felt and what led to it
explain how you felt and what led to it
explain how you felt and what led to it and how you got out of it and and I want
and how you got out of it and and I want
and how you got out of it and and I want to do the same right if i’m in debt i
to do the same right if i’m in debt i
to do the same right if i’m in debt i want to do the same thing i want i want
want to do the same thing i want i want
want to do the same thing i want i want your advice and expertise and if you can
your advice and expertise and if you can
your advice and expertise and if you can make me connect to you then i’ll sign up
make me connect to you then i’ll sign up
make me connect to you then i’ll sign up for your newsletter and i’ll buy your
for your newsletter and i’ll buy your
for your newsletter and i’ll buy your product and i’ll follow you and I’m
product and i’ll follow you and I’m
product and i’ll follow you and I’m trusting you so to build that trust you
trusting you so to build that trust you
trusting you so to build that trust you have to tell more of your story and
have to tell more of your story and
have to tell more of your story and build it up from there but it’s a good
build it up from there but it’s a good
build it up from there but it’s a good start again tell more your story may be
start again tell more your story may be
start again tell more your story may be invested in the design and and keep me
invested in the design and and keep me
invested in the design and and keep me posted with your progress obviously it’s
posted with your progress obviously it’s
posted with your progress obviously it’s a new site you haven’t done much on it
a new site you haven’t done much on it
a new site you haven’t done much on it yet but I’m excited to see where this
yet but I’m excited to see where this
yet but I’m excited to see where this thing can go for those are watching you
thing can go for those are watching you
thing can go for those are watching you liked the video give it a thumbs up
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liked the video give it a thumbs up below let me know what you think I’d
below let me know what you think I’d
below let me know what you think I’d love to hear a comment leave it below
love to hear a comment leave it below
love to hear a comment leave it below you have a question put in the comments
you have a question put in the comments
you have a question put in the comments I make a video response thank you so
I make a video response thank you so
I make a video response thank you so much and I’ll see you soon
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