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How to write an effective bio for your company – Ask Evan


hi I’m Evan Carmichael welcome to

hi I’m Evan Carmichael welcome to another edition of ask Evan in today’s

another edition of ask Evan in today’s

another edition of ask Evan in today’s video I’m going to answer a question

video I’m going to answer a question

video I’m going to answer a question from one of my readers Sean who’s an

from one of my readers Sean who’s an

from one of my readers Sean who’s an aspiring entrepreneur in the real estate

aspiring entrepreneur in the real estate

aspiring entrepreneur in the real estate business and wants to write a bio for

business and wants to write a bio for

business and wants to write a bio for himself that will help sell him to

himself that will help sell him to

himself that will help sell him to clients and one of my advice and what to

clients and one of my advice and what to

clients and one of my advice and what to do so Sean can grab someone to start up

do so Sean can grab someone to start up

do so Sean can grab someone to start up a new company that’s awesome the real

a new company that’s awesome the real

a new company that’s awesome the real estate business is hyper competitive

estate business is hyper competitive

estate business is hyper competitive tons of people in that market really

tons of people in that market really

tons of people in that market really hard to stand out and people are often

hard to stand out and people are often

hard to stand out and people are often over pitching themselves so they promise

over pitching themselves so they promise

over pitching themselves so they promise things that you know Ben if they can’t

things that you know Ben if they can’t

things that you know Ben if they can’t necessarily deliver on and as a result

necessarily deliver on and as a result

necessarily deliver on and as a result people don’t really trust a lot of

people don’t really trust a lot of

people don’t really trust a lot of people in the real estate business so it

people in the real estate business so it

people in the real estate business so it can be really hard for you to stand out

can be really hard for you to stand out

can be really hard for you to stand out if borrowing your shoes I take this

if borrowing your shoes I take this

if borrowing your shoes I take this lightly different approach what I would

lightly different approach what I would

lightly different approach what I would do is start with finding two or three

do is start with finding two or three

do is start with finding two or three words that best describe the type of

words that best describe the type of

words that best describe the type of person you are and some of your values

person you are and some of your values

person you are and some of your values so think about maybe your friendly and

so think about maybe your friendly and

so think about maybe your friendly and outgoing and compassionate or maybe your

outgoing and compassionate or maybe your

outgoing and compassionate or maybe your you know hardworking or a warrior

you know hardworking or a warrior

you know hardworking or a warrior negotiator whatever are the kind of key

negotiator whatever are the kind of key

negotiator whatever are the kind of key words that best describe you and try to

words that best describe you and try to

words that best describe you and try to put that into one sentence to start so

put that into one sentence to start so

put that into one sentence to start so your your one sentence kind of quick

your your one sentence kind of quick

your your one sentence kind of quick intro when you first meeting somebody

intro when you first meeting somebody

intro when you first meeting somebody I’m Sean and I am the you know XYZ

I’m Sean and I am the you know XYZ

I’m Sean and I am the you know XYZ whatever your sentence is and that will

whatever your sentence is and that will

whatever your sentence is and that will help start to differentiate you and

help start to differentiate you and

help start to differentiate you and you’ll start to attract people who like

you’ll start to attract people who like

you’ll start to attract people who like those values so there’s tons of people

those values so there’s tons of people

those values so there’s tons of people who want to get you know people in real

who want to get you know people in real

who want to get you know people in real estate business and you want to be able

estate business and you want to be able

estate business and you want to be able to attract the clients that will best be

to attract the clients that will best be

to attract the clients that will best be suited to your nature so as an example

suited to your nature so as an example

suited to your nature so as an example one of the things in my business is I

one of the things in my business is I

one of the things in my business is I try to hire people who are nice I think

try to hire people who are nice I think

try to hire people who are nice I think I’m a nice person and I like working

I’m a nice person and I like working

I’m a nice person and I like working with nice people so in our job

with nice people so in our job

with nice people so in our job description we always say we’re looking

description we always say we’re looking

description we always say we’re looking for people who are nice now some people

for people who are nice now some people

for people who are nice now some people who look at that may think this is it’s

who look at that may think this is it’s

who look at that may think this is it’s really stupid to look for somebody who’s

really stupid to look for somebody who’s

really stupid to look for somebody who’s nice who says that and you know the

nice who says that and you know the

nice who says that and you know the probably the people who are thinking

probably the people who are thinking

probably the people who are thinking about that I don’t want them working for

about that I don’t want them working for

about that I don’t want them working for my business I want the guys who are nice

my business I want the guys who are nice

my business I want the guys who are nice who see that same yeah I want to work

who see that same yeah I want to work

who see that same yeah I want to work with other nice people too so if you can

with other nice people too so if you can

with other nice people too so if you can come up with that kind of one sentence

come up with that kind of one sentence

come up with that kind of one sentence that describes who you are with those

that describes who you are with those

that describes who you are with those key characteristics then you’ll attract

key characteristics then you’ll attract

key characteristics then you’ll attract clients who want to work with that type

clients who want to work with that type

clients who want to work with that type of person and it’ll be a lot easier for

of person and it’ll be a lot easier for

of person and it’ll be a lot easier for you to work with those people as well

you to work with those people as well

you to work with those people as well because you have kind of

because you have kind of

because you have kind of same values the next thing I would do is

same values the next thing I would do is

same values the next thing I would do is try to get testimonials so instead of

try to get testimonials so instead of

try to get testimonials so instead of writing a huge long bio a lot of it is

writing a huge long bio a lot of it is

writing a huge long bio a lot of it is fluff right people really read those

fluff right people really read those

fluff right people really read those things there’s so many competitors again

things there’s so many competitors again

things there’s so many competitors again going up against you so what I would

going up against you so what I would

going up against you so what I would look at is trying to get testimonials

look at is trying to get testimonials

look at is trying to get testimonials from people who know you and who’ve

from people who know you and who’ve

from people who know you and who’ve worked with you in the past though you

worked with you in the past though you

worked with you in the past though you said you’re an inspiring entrepreneur so

said you’re an inspiring entrepreneur so

said you’re an inspiring entrepreneur so I don’t know if you have any clients yet

I don’t know if you have any clients yet

I don’t know if you have any clients yet if not then get people who can talk to

if not then get people who can talk to

if not then get people who can talk to those values that you’ve talked about so

those values that you’ve talked about so

those values that you’ve talked about so you know if you’re friendly and

you know if you’re friendly and

you know if you’re friendly and hardworking as an example get people who

hardworking as an example get people who

hardworking as an example get people who you know who can say how friendly and

you know who can say how friendly and

you know who can say how friendly and hardworking you are so people can see

hardworking you are so people can see

hardworking you are so people can see the stories of people who you’ve worked

the stories of people who you’ve worked

the stories of people who you’ve worked with or people who know you then those

with or people who know you then those

with or people who know you then those stories help sell how friendly and

stories help sell how friendly and

stories help sell how friendly and hardworking you are as an example and

hardworking you are as an example and

hardworking you are as an example and people gonna want to have to do business

people gonna want to have to do business

people gonna want to have to do business with you I’d also try to get them to do

with you I’d also try to get them to do

with you I’d also try to get them to do it on video if possible so you don’t get

it on video if possible so you don’t get

it on video if possible so you don’t get a get a camera go record some of these

a get a camera go record some of these

a get a camera go record some of these guys it doesn’t have to look

guys it doesn’t have to look

guys it doesn’t have to look professional the more professional look

professional the more professional look

professional the more professional look sometimes the less credible it is so you

sometimes the less credible it is so you

sometimes the less credible it is so you want to look authentic get a camera

want to look authentic get a camera

want to look authentic get a camera record some people saying you know how

record some people saying you know how

record some people saying you know how great you are with those different

great you are with those different

great you are with those different characteristics and I’d always include

characteristics and I’d always include

characteristics and I’d always include that on my website and links to it and

that on my website and links to it and

that on my website and links to it and all my marketing materials people can

all my marketing materials people can

all my marketing materials people can quickly get an understanding of who you

quickly get an understanding of who you

quickly get an understanding of who you are so Shaun I hope that helps that’s

are so Shaun I hope that helps that’s

are so Shaun I hope that helps that’s what I would do I know it’s really tough

what I would do I know it’s really tough

what I would do I know it’s really tough I’m gonna turn it over to my friend

I’m gonna turn it over to my friend

I’m gonna turn it over to my friend Danny Amy from Falco marketing and he’s

Danny Amy from Falco marketing and he’s

Danny Amy from Falco marketing and he’s gonna share his thoughts on the question

gonna share his thoughts on the question

gonna share his thoughts on the question as well

hi Sean thank you for your question the

hi Sean thank you for your question the best way to market yourself with a

best way to market yourself with a

best way to market yourself with a company bhaiyya depends on your sales

company bhaiyya depends on your sales

company bhaiyya depends on your sales cycle in other words when are people

cycle in other words when are people

cycle in other words when are people going to read this company bio I’ll give

going to read this company bio I’ll give

going to read this company bio I’ll give you two separate examples in one example

you two separate examples in one example

you two separate examples in one example you’re gonna have a website people are

you’re gonna have a website people are

you’re gonna have a website people are gonna find you on your website and the

gonna find you on your website and the

gonna find you on your website and the company bio is one of the first

company bio is one of the first

company bio is one of the first impressions that the audience will have

impressions that the audience will have

impressions that the audience will have of you in another example you’re an

of you in another example you’re an

of you in another example you’re an offline networking business you’re gonna

offline networking business you’re gonna

offline networking business you’re gonna meet someone shake their hand give them

meet someone shake their hand give them

meet someone shake their hand give them your card make an impression on them and

your card make an impression on them and

your card make an impression on them and then they’re gonna go to your website

then they’re gonna go to your website

then they’re gonna go to your website and read your bio and those in both of

and read your bio and those in both of

and read your bio and those in both of those cases the bio fits into a very

those cases the bio fits into a very

those cases the bio fits into a very different role in the sales cycle so

different role in the sales cycle so

different role in the sales cycle so that’s the first thing you have to think

that’s the first thing you have to think

that’s the first thing you have to think of what is your sales cycle look like if

of what is your sales cycle look like if

of what is your sales cycle look like if it’s on a website if the bio basically

it’s on a website if the bio basically

it’s on a website if the bio basically has to do a lot of the selling for you

has to do a lot of the selling for you

has to do a lot of the selling for you in the sense that it is the first

in the sense that it is the first

in the sense that it is the first impression then think about what do you

impression then think about what do you

impression then think about what do you have to present to first grab someone’s

have to present to first grab someone’s

have to present to first grab someone’s attention whereas if it’s something that

attention whereas if it’s something that

attention whereas if it’s something that they come into later in the sales cycle

they come into later in the sales cycle

they come into later in the sales cycle when they’re really just going to your

when they’re really just going to your

when they’re really just going to your website to check up on you and see if

website to check up on you and see if

website to check up on you and see if you’re in legitimate if you’re for real

you’re in legitimate if you’re for real

you’re in legitimate if you’re for real then you want to focus more on

then you want to focus more on

then you want to focus more on credibility building content like your

credibility building content like your

credibility building content like your credentials and your successes your

credentials and your successes your

credentials and your successes your experiences etc so I hope that helps you

experiences etc so I hope that helps you

experiences etc so I hope that helps you I hope that gets you off to the right

I hope that gets you off to the right

I hope that gets you off to the right start if you would like to tell me a

start if you would like to tell me a

start if you would like to tell me a little more about what your business is

little more about what your business is

little more about what your business is and write up a draft for me to give you

and write up a draft for me to give you

and write up a draft for me to give you some feedback on you can find me at fire

some feedback on you can find me at fire

some feedback on you can find me at fire for marketing comm I’d be very happy to

for marketing comm I’d be very happy to

for marketing comm I’d be very happy to help you out thank you very much and

help you out thank you very much and

help you out thank you very much and I’ll see you all on the next video so

I’ll see you all on the next video so

I’ll see you all on the next video so Sean I hope that was helpful I hope what

Sean I hope that was helpful I hope what

Sean I hope that was helpful I hope what I said was useful and I hope what you

I said was useful and I hope what you

I said was useful and I hope what you liked what Danny had to say as well good

liked what Danny had to say as well good

liked what Danny had to say as well good luck writing the bio I know it’s tough

luck writing the bio I know it’s tough

luck writing the bio I know it’s tough to kind of get started and get those

to kind of get started and get those

to kind of get started and get those first few clients if you need any extra

first few clients if you need any extra

first few clients if you need any extra help feel free to shoot me an email with

help feel free to shoot me an email with

help feel free to shoot me an email with with what you come up with for everybody

with what you come up with for everybody

with what you come up with for everybody else if you guys liked the video please

else if you guys liked the video please

else if you guys liked the video please give it a thumbs up below it helps me

give it a thumbs up below it helps me

give it a thumbs up below it helps me make more of these videos and know you

make more of these videos and know you

make more of these videos and know you guys like them and I’d also love to hear

guys like them and I’d also love to hear

guys like them and I’d also love to hear what you have to say if you want to

what you have to say if you want to

what you have to say if you want to leave a comment underneath and get a

leave a comment underneath and get a

leave a comment underneath and get a conversation going so thank you and stay

conversation going so thank you and stay

conversation going so thank you and stay tuned for the next episode

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