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hi I’m Evan Carmichael welcome to an

hi I’m Evan Carmichael welcome to an edition of ask Evan weren’t answer

edition of ask Evan weren’t answer

edition of ask Evan weren’t answer questions from my readers today mansion

questions from my readers today mansion

questions from my readers today mansion question from David Hurley who’s one of

question from David Hurley who’s one of

question from David Hurley who’s one of our forum moderators who wanted me to

our forum moderators who wanted me to

our forum moderators who wanted me to check out his landing page so thank you

check out his landing page so thank you

check out his landing page so thank you David and I apologize in advance for

David and I apologize in advance for

David and I apologize in advance for being so late on this one they would

being so late on this one they would

being so late on this one they would post this in June and now it’s October

post this in June and now it’s October

post this in June and now it’s October to take me awhile to get to this one but

to take me awhile to get to this one but

to take me awhile to get to this one but hopefully I can still give you some good

hopefully I can still give you some good

hopefully I can still give you some good advice so I loaded it up here this is

advice so I loaded it up here this is

advice so I loaded it up here this is the page is promoting SFI affiliate

the page is promoting SFI affiliate

the page is promoting SFI affiliate success handbook my immediate thoughts

success handbook my immediate thoughts

success handbook my immediate thoughts looking on this is that the design could

looking on this is that the design could

looking on this is that the design could be a little bit better doesn’t have to

be a little bit better doesn’t have to

be a little bit better doesn’t have to be fantastic or amazing but there’s a

be fantastic or amazing but there’s a

be fantastic or amazing but there’s a lot of even just using WordPress some

lot of even just using WordPress some

lot of even just using WordPress some simple templates you can use to just

simple templates you can use to just

simple templates you can use to just spruce up the design a little bit again

spruce up the design a little bit again

spruce up the design a little bit again you’re promoting something that is going

you’re promoting something that is going

you’re promoting something that is going to hopefully make somebody a lot of

to hopefully make somebody a lot of

to hopefully make somebody a lot of money so you want to make it look like

money so you want to make it look like

money so you want to make it look like you know you’re making a lot of money

you know you’re making a lot of money

you know you’re making a lot of money from it as well and design can speak to

from it as well and design can speak to

from it as well and design can speak to that so I know the better it looks the

that so I know the better it looks the

that so I know the better it looks the more successful people are going to

more successful people are going to

more successful people are going to think how you are with it so just a

think how you are with it so just a

think how you are with it so just a quick thought on the design next thing

quick thought on the design next thing

quick thought on the design next thing is it was presented by Ron Jackson so I

is it was presented by Ron Jackson so I

is it was presented by Ron Jackson so I don’t know who Ron Jackson is you know

don’t know who Ron Jackson is you know

don’t know who Ron Jackson is you know I’m not in the SFI or affiliate

I’m not in the SFI or affiliate

I’m not in the SFI or affiliate marketing world so maybe he’s really

marketing world so maybe he’s really

marketing world so maybe he’s really well known i’d probably have something

well known i’d probably have something

well known i’d probably have something here with a link that i could click on

here with a link that i could click on

here with a link that i could click on his bio to learn a little bit more about

his bio to learn a little bit more about

his bio to learn a little bit more about him i’m assuming if you’ve partnered

him i’m assuming if you’ve partnered

him i’m assuming if you’ve partnered with him then he he has some credibility

with him then he he has some credibility

with him then he he has some credibility recognition so i’d want to showcase that

recognition so i’d want to showcase that

recognition so i’d want to showcase that and talk a little bit more about who he

and talk a little bit more about who he

and talk a little bit more about who he is just give me the option to learn more

is just give me the option to learn more

is just give me the option to learn more about him i’d also try to find a better

about him i’d also try to find a better

about him i’d also try to find a better picture again he may be a huge legend in

picture again he may be a huge legend in

picture again he may be a huge legend in his field but the picture is not

his field but the picture is not

his field but the picture is not fantastic again we want to try to if

fantastic again we want to try to if

fantastic again we want to try to if you’re promoting an opportunity to make

you’re promoting an opportunity to make

you’re promoting an opportunity to make a lot of money the idea what the picture

a lot of money the idea what the picture

a lot of money the idea what the picture is that we want to aspire to be that

is that we want to aspire to be that

is that we want to aspire to be that person right so if you even just

person right so if you even just

person right so if you even just comparing your picture here this is

comparing your picture here this is

comparing your picture here this is David to Tehran’s this is a little more

David to Tehran’s this is a little more

David to Tehran’s this is a little more aspirational right it’s a good-looking

aspirational right it’s a good-looking

aspirational right it’s a good-looking guys on the water and Japan you know

guys on the water and Japan you know

guys on the water and Japan you know travel photos this looks good this is

travel photos this looks good this is

travel photos this looks good this is something I might want to you know be

something I might want to you know be

something I might want to you know be like this guy this picture is a nice

like this guy this picture is a nice

like this guy this picture is a nice smile but it doesn’t make me want to be

smile but it doesn’t make me want to be

smile but it doesn’t make me want to be like Ron Jackson so

like Ron Jackson so

like Ron Jackson so to find a better picture of him and I’m

to find a better picture of him and I’m

to find a better picture of him and I’m again I’m sure if you partner with him

again I’m sure if you partner with him

again I’m sure if you partner with him he’s very well known he has a lot of

he’s very well known he has a lot of

he’s very well known he has a lot of great content I just try to find a

great content I just try to find a

great content I just try to find a better picture so that people you know

better picture so that people you know

better picture so that people you know want to be like him and have the success

want to be like him and have the success

want to be like him and have the success that he’s had as well so that and have a

that he’s had as well so that and have a

that he’s had as well so that and have a little bit of eye on him also I put a

little bit of eye on him also I put a

little bit of eye on him also I put a little more on you so you know I know

little more on you so you know I know

little more on you so you know I know you David from the farms and you have a

you David from the farms and you have a

you David from the farms and you have a lot of great content great information

lot of great content great information

lot of great content great information and you’ve been an awesome member but

and you’ve been an awesome member but

and you’ve been an awesome member but for people who may not know you as much

for people who may not know you as much

for people who may not know you as much you know they want to have a little more

you know they want to have a little more

you know they want to have a little more information on you’re here to be able to

information on you’re here to be able to

information on you’re here to be able to click on that and and some information

click on that and and some information

click on that and and some information pops up your bio I may want to have a

pops up your bio I may want to have a

pops up your bio I may want to have a video on there no it’s been kind of

video on there no it’s been kind of

video on there no it’s been kind of experiencing with with video a great way

experiencing with with video a great way

experiencing with with video a great way to be able to get people to kind of take

to be able to get people to kind of take

to be able to get people to kind of take that next step so I think about it talk

that next step so I think about it talk

that next step so I think about it talk about the book of why it’s so helpful

about the book of why it’s so helpful

about the book of why it’s so helpful and why people should sign up for could

and why people should sign up for could

and why people should sign up for could really help boost your conversions if

really help boost your conversions if

really help boost your conversions if you do even a simple video that’s

you do even a simple video that’s

you do even a simple video that’s heartfelt and passionate and you explain

heartfelt and passionate and you explain

heartfelt and passionate and you explain why you’re so into SFI affiliates next

why you’re so into SFI affiliates next

why you’re so into SFI affiliates next thing I try to look at is what is SFI

thing I try to look at is what is SFI

thing I try to look at is what is SFI I’m you know people may not have heard

I’m you know people may not have heard

I’m you know people may not have heard of it before you may only be targeting

of it before you may only be targeting

of it before you may only be targeting people who are part of the SF 5

people who are part of the SF 5

people who are part of the SF 5 community which is fine in that case it

community which is fine in that case it

community which is fine in that case it makes sense but for people who are

makes sense but for people who are

makes sense but for people who are finding this on their own or through

finding this on their own or through

finding this on their own or through links on the forms or wherever you’re

links on the forms or wherever you’re

links on the forms or wherever you’re promoting it it could be good idea just

promoting it it could be good idea just

promoting it it could be good idea just to explain what is SFI why is it the the

to explain what is SFI why is it the the

to explain what is SFI why is it the the secret formula making money with the

secret formula making money with the

secret formula making money with the most successful free business

most successful free business

most successful free business opportunity in Japan why is that suffice

opportunity in Japan why is that suffice

opportunity in Japan why is that suffice so great what is it all about so that

so great what is it all about so that

so great what is it all about so that could be in your quick video or another

could be in your quick video or another

could be in your quick video or another quick link that explains what SFI is all

quick link that explains what SFI is all

quick link that explains what SFI is all about with any workbook I always

about with any workbook I always

about with any workbook I always recommend trying to explain what it is

recommend trying to explain what it is

recommend trying to explain what it is that I’m going to learn so it’s created

that I’m going to learn so it’s created

that I’m going to learn so it’s created how to make money with all this business

how to make money with all this business

how to make money with all this business opportunity the challenge here is

opportunity the challenge here is

opportunity the challenge here is although I’m sure you have some awesome

although I’m sure you have some awesome

although I’m sure you have some awesome content in here you’re going up against

content in here you’re going up against

content in here you’re going up against a lot of people who have really crappy

a lot of people who have really crappy

a lot of people who have really crappy content and so how do you separate it’s

content and so how do you separate it’s

content and so how do you separate it’s good to show a little bit more about

good to show a little bit more about

good to show a little bit more about what people are going to learn to

what people are going to learn to

what people are going to learn to convince them to take that next step I

convince them to take that next step I

convince them to take that next step I sign up now it’s free so they don’t have

sign up now it’s free so they don’t have

sign up now it’s free so they don’t have to do a lot to got to go to that next

to do a lot to got to go to that next

to do a lot to got to go to that next step but it’s so recommend doing it is

step but it’s so recommend doing it is

step but it’s so recommend doing it is way just to boost conversions again if

way just to boost conversions again if

way just to boost conversions again if you can show a little bit more not just

you can show a little bit more not just

you can show a little bit more not just promise whatever else is promising it

promise whatever else is promising it

promise whatever else is promising it helps you stand out from everybody else

helps you stand out from everybody else

helps you stand out from everybody else and shows that hey

and shows that hey

and shows that hey actually really do have some really good

actually really do have some really good

actually really do have some really good content and even as a quick example let

content and even as a quick example let

content and even as a quick example let me load up one of mine so these are

me load up one of mine so these are

me load up one of mine so these are worksheets that we put together these

worksheets that we put together these

worksheets that we put together these are for sale but just as an example as I

are for sale but just as an example as I

are for sale but just as an example as I go down here this is a screenshot so

go down here this is a screenshot so

go down here this is a screenshot so this is the you know find your passion

this is the you know find your passion

this is the you know find your passion helps entrepreneurs find their passion

helps entrepreneurs find their passion

helps entrepreneurs find their passion for sale but will show them what it

for sale but will show them what it

for sale but will show them what it looks like and we’ll show them what’s

looks like and we’ll show them what’s

looks like and we’ll show them what’s involved in it so you can see you’re

involved in it so you can see you’re

involved in it so you can see you’re going to get practical advice from these

going to get practical advice from these

going to get practical advice from these famous entrepreneurs here a few examples

famous entrepreneurs here a few examples

famous entrepreneurs here a few examples Oh Bruins his advice to know if you’re

Oh Bruins his advice to know if you’re

Oh Bruins his advice to know if you’re doing the right thing or not so you’re

doing the right thing or not so you’re

doing the right thing or not so you’re not giving away anything I’m not I’m not

not giving away anything I’m not I’m not

not giving away anything I’m not I’m not seeing what the advice is but I’m giving

seeing what the advice is but I’m giving

seeing what the advice is but I’m giving little teasers so that people are really

little teasers so that people are really

little teasers so that people are really curious I want to take that next step so

curious I want to take that next step so

curious I want to take that next step so now showing how long this book is some

now showing how long this book is some

now showing how long this book is some screenshots of it to let people know

screenshots of it to let people know

screenshots of it to let people know that it has a lot of media value to it

that it has a lot of media value to it

that it has a lot of media value to it and just high-level some of the things

and just high-level some of the things

and just high-level some of the things that they’re going to learn could be

that they’re going to learn could be

that they’re going to learn could be very helpful without giving away really

very helpful without giving away really

very helpful without giving away really any details about it so that hopefully

any details about it so that hopefully

any details about it so that hopefully will help if i look back down here again

will help if i look back down here again

will help if i look back down here again at the bottom two you’ll also see that I

at the bottom two you’ll also see that I

at the bottom two you’ll also see that I talk about myself so people who are

talk about myself so people who are

talk about myself so people who are coming to this page may or do you know

coming to this page may or do you know

coming to this page may or do you know me but if they don’t it talks a little

me but if they don’t it talks a little

me but if they don’t it talks a little bit about Who I am the media been in the

bit about Who I am the media been in the

bit about Who I am the media been in the TV stuff that I’ve done so similar to

TV stuff that I’ve done so similar to

TV stuff that I’ve done so similar to this great picture here who’s David

this great picture here who’s David

this great picture here who’s David Hurley so quick you know link to be able

Hurley so quick you know link to be able

Hurley so quick you know link to be able to click on that and learn a little bit

to click on that and learn a little bit

to click on that and learn a little bit more about yourself in the success

more about yourself in the success

more about yourself in the success you’ve had with the SFI I also noticed

you’ve had with the SFI I also noticed

you’ve had with the SFI I also noticed there’s a broken image here so again

there’s a broken image here so again

there’s a broken image here so again just professionalism you want to you

just professionalism you want to you

just professionalism you want to you know clean up anything that’s broken to

know clean up anything that’s broken to

know clean up anything that’s broken to make it look as good as you possibly can

make it look as good as you possibly can

make it look as good as you possibly can I love this review here this is great

I love this review here this is great

I love this review here this is great five stars this guy named Joe that would

five stars this guy named Joe that would

five stars this guy named Joe that would be good that maybe have a little more

be good that maybe have a little more

be good that maybe have a little more information on here it’s great that this

information on here it’s great that this

information on here it’s great that this thing sells or thirty-five dollars and

thing sells or thirty-five dollars and

thing sells or thirty-five dollars and you’re giving it away for free so you

you’re giving it away for free so you

you’re giving it away for free so you can click on tripleclicks and see what

can click on tripleclicks and see what

can click on tripleclicks and see what this is all about just quickly so here

this is all about just quickly so here

this is all about just quickly so here it is 35 bucks it’s great for star is

it is 35 bucks it’s great for star is

it is 35 bucks it’s great for star is great i might click on product reviews

great i might click on product reviews

great i might click on product reviews and these are actually great so you have

and these are actually great so you have

and these are actually great so you have ninety-one percent of buyers would

ninety-one percent of buyers would

ninety-one percent of buyers would recommend this eighty-two percent it

recommend this eighty-two percent it

recommend this eighty-two percent it would buy it again these are great

would buy it again these are great

would buy it again these are great numbers you might want to copy and paste

numbers you might want to copy and paste

numbers you might want to copy and paste this

this

this and put it into your interior sales that

and put it into your interior sales that

and put it into your interior sales that are here I didn’t quite know where this

are here I didn’t quite know where this

are here I didn’t quite know where this was coming from but you can say stats

was coming from but you can say stats

was coming from but you can say stats from tripleclicks you know some great

from tripleclicks you know some great

from tripleclicks you know some great testimonials I try to include these here

testimonials I try to include these here

testimonials I try to include these here especially when you have one of a

especially when you have one of a

especially when you have one of a picture picture of a guy picture of a

picture picture of a guy picture of a

picture picture of a guy picture of a girl that’s awesome put both of those in

girl that’s awesome put both of those in

girl that’s awesome put both of those in include that below it adds more

include that below it adds more

include that below it adds more credibility and you can also make this a

credibility and you can also make this a

credibility and you can also make this a something that’s clickable so if I click

something that’s clickable so if I click

something that’s clickable so if I click on that it’ll take me to the page here

on that it’ll take me to the page here

on that it’ll take me to the page here so again it shows that it’s a little bit

so again it shows that it’s a little bit

so again it shows that it’s a little bit more legitimate because people and again

more legitimate because people and again

more legitimate because people and again I I know I’m for those you’re watching

I I know I’m for those you’re watching

I I know I’m for those you’re watching David is a really you know reputable

David is a really you know reputable

David is a really you know reputable stand-up guy but challenges your he’s

stand-up guy but challenges your he’s

stand-up guy but challenges your he’s going up against a lot of guys who are

going up against a lot of guys who are

going up against a lot of guys who are not so there’s a lot of skepticism in

not so there’s a lot of skepticism in

not so there’s a lot of skepticism in the industry and people could think that

the industry and people could think that

the industry and people could think that this is your something you put on

this is your something you put on

this is your something you put on yourself all right so having that as a

yourself all right so having that as a

yourself all right so having that as a link that you can click and you can see

link that you can click and you can see

link that you can click and you can see hey there’s actually somebody who left

hey there’s actually somebody who left

hey there’s actually somebody who left this could add a lot of value so

this could add a lot of value so

this could add a lot of value so hopefully that helped it’s great to see

hopefully that helped it’s great to see

hopefully that helped it’s great to see that there’s a easy next step the call

that there’s a easy next step the call

that there’s a easy next step the call to actions really big easily leave name

to actions really big easily leave name

to actions really big easily leave name and email submit so that that side is

and email submit so that that side is

and email submit so that that side is good it’s great to see you’ve got some

good it’s great to see you’ve got some

good it’s great to see you’ve got some good conversions already from this page

good conversions already from this page

good conversions already from this page I think if you did some of those steps

I think if you did some of those steps

I think if you did some of those steps so no more information who you guys are

so no more information who you guys are

so no more information who you guys are slightly better picture slightly

slightly better picture slightly

slightly better picture slightly improved design share more of those

improved design share more of those

improved design share more of those testimonials and show a little bit more

testimonials and show a little bit more

testimonials and show a little bit more about what SFI is and what they’re going

about what SFI is and what they’re going

about what SFI is and what they’re going to learn in this handbook maybe some

to learn in this handbook maybe some

to learn in this handbook maybe some screenshots I think you could get your

screenshots I think you could get your

screenshots I think you could get your conversion to the next level and

conversion to the next level and

conversion to the next level and hopefully also include a video to take

hopefully also include a video to take

hopefully also include a video to take it up a level higher so hopefully that

it up a level higher so hopefully that

it up a level higher so hopefully that helped David sorry again for the delayed

helped David sorry again for the delayed

helped David sorry again for the delayed response on making this video for those

response on making this video for those

response on making this video for those of you watching if you liked the video

of you watching if you liked the video

of you watching if you liked the video please give it a thumbs up below it

please give it a thumbs up below it

please give it a thumbs up below it makes you want to do more of these

makes you want to do more of these

makes you want to do more of these videos for you and if you have any

videos for you and if you have any

videos for you and if you have any thoughts about this website or you want

thoughts about this website or you want

thoughts about this website or you want your own website reviewed feel free to

your own website reviewed feel free to

your own website reviewed feel free to leave it in the comments below I always

leave it in the comments below I always

leave it in the comments below I always check out the comments it always makes

check out the comments it always makes

check out the comments it always makes my day when I see somebody’s left to

my day when I see somebody’s left to

my day when I see somebody’s left to comment so please leave a comment and

comment so please leave a comment and

comment so please leave a comment and I’ll see you on the next episode

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