hi I’m Evan Carmichael your friend and all things entrepreneurship today I’m
all things entrepreneurship today I’m
all things entrepreneurship today I’m doing another one of my fiber gigs and
doing another one of my fiber gigs and
doing another one of my fiber gigs and reviewing a website from one of my
reviewing a website from one of my
reviewing a website from one of my readers LJ Walker and LJ his business
readers LJ Walker and LJ his business
readers LJ Walker and LJ his business here is my MC a pro com and this is some
here is my MC a pro com and this is some
here is my MC a pro com and this is some information about the website so looking
information about the website so looking
information about the website so looking at the site it’s a cleanly designed it
at the site it’s a cleanly designed it
at the site it’s a cleanly designed it looks very professional and looks like
looks very professional and looks like
looks very professional and looks like it’s some kind of network marketing
it’s some kind of network marketing
it’s some kind of network marketing program where typically they give you a
program where typically they give you a
program where typically they give you a website and you can see here it’s my MC
website and you can see here it’s my MC
website and you can see here it’s my MC a pro com /l jaywalker so that’s that’s
a pro com /l jaywalker so that’s that’s
a pro com /l jaywalker so that’s that’s LJ’s own personal domain for this and
LJ’s own personal domain for this and
LJ’s own personal domain for this and these are typically very hard to
these are typically very hard to
these are typically very hard to customize now let’s see how good a job
customize now let’s see how good a job
customize now let’s see how good a job the organization has done here at doing
the organization has done here at doing
the organization has done here at doing it oh this is a video here which is
it oh this is a video here which is
it oh this is a video here which is great welcome to my site the first thing
great welcome to my site the first thing
great welcome to my site the first thing that pops out is I’m wondering what do
that pops out is I’m wondering what do
that pops out is I’m wondering what do these guys do so it says my motor club
these guys do so it says my motor club
these guys do so it says my motor club of america so i i’m not quite sure what
of america so i i’m not quite sure what
of america so i i’m not quite sure what it is that we’re selling it looks like
it is that we’re selling it looks like
it is that we’re selling it looks like there’s an opportunity to make some
there’s an opportunity to make some
there’s an opportunity to make some money looking at the testimonials I’ve
money looking at the testimonials I’ve
money looking at the testimonials I’ve been in MCA for a few months now and for
been in MCA for a few months now and for
been in MCA for a few months now and for the first time I have no money worries
the first time I have no money worries
the first time I have no money worries so it is an opportunity to make money i
so it is an opportunity to make money i
so it is an opportunity to make money i would put something here if it’s
would put something here if it’s
would put something here if it’s possible to change instead of walking to
possible to change instead of walking to
possible to change instead of walking to my site put a one-sentence explain what
my site put a one-sentence explain what
my site put a one-sentence explain what it is that you’re selling here so i said
it is that you’re selling here so i said
it is that you’re selling here so i said the video will explain a little bit more
the video will explain a little bit more
the video will explain a little bit more would be great to see one sentence so if
would be great to see one sentence so if
would be great to see one sentence so if I land on this page it quickly explains
I land on this page it quickly explains
I land on this page it quickly explains what it is that you do so i can quickly
what it is that you do so i can quickly
what it is that you do so i can quickly get that grasp I like that it’s 1926
get that grasp I like that it’s 1926
get that grasp I like that it’s 1926 established so it adds a little more
established so it adds a little more
established so it adds a little more credibility a lot of these programs are
credibility a lot of these programs are
credibility a lot of these programs are you know they just set up their
you know they just set up their
you know they just set up their fly-by-night that promise you to make a
fly-by-night that promise you to make a
fly-by-night that promise you to make a lot of money and then they go away so
lot of money and then they go away so
lot of money and then they go away so that’s great that it’s been around for
that’s great that it’s been around for
that’s great that it’s been around for so long I love that there are
so long I love that there are
so long I love that there are testimonials here this is awesome again
testimonials here this is awesome again
testimonials here this is awesome again some proof to show that you know this is
some proof to show that you know this is
some proof to show that you know this is this is a good opportunity for people if
this is a good opportunity for people if
this is a good opportunity for people if possible be great to see pictures of
possible be great to see pictures of
possible be great to see pictures of these people it just makes a little more
these people it just makes a little more
these people it just makes a little more believable to hit home
believable to hit home
believable to hit home little more people love seeing people’s
little more people love seeing people’s
little more people love seeing people’s faces so if these people do have faces
faces so if these people do have faces
faces so if these people do have faces and you have the ability to edit that I
and you have the ability to edit that I
and you have the ability to edit that I definitely put those in as much as
definitely put those in as much as
definitely put those in as much as possible if I scroll up we’ve got a
possible if I scroll up we’ve got a
possible if I scroll up we’ve got a phone number here that we can call
phone number here that we can call
phone number here that we can call obvious this LG Walker so this is your
obvious this LG Walker so this is your
obvious this LG Walker so this is your own home page we’ve got facebook and
own home page we’ve got facebook and
own home page we’ve got facebook and twitter let’s see what’s happening on
twitter let’s see what’s happening on
twitter let’s see what’s happening on facebook the facebook page just loads
facebook the facebook page just loads
facebook the facebook page just loads the same page let’s see what Twitter and
the same page let’s see what Twitter and
the same page let’s see what Twitter and the Twitter page does the same thing so
the Twitter page does the same thing so
the Twitter page does the same thing so I probably remove those because it’s not
I probably remove those because it’s not
I probably remove those because it’s not really adding to the experience here for
really adding to the experience here for
really adding to the experience here for people who are coming to your website
people who are coming to your website
people who are coming to your website the biggest thing that I probably
the biggest thing that I probably
the biggest thing that I probably improve on this is I would put your own
improve on this is I would put your own
improve on this is I would put your own story this is where a lot of these
story this is where a lot of these
story this is where a lot of these network marketing things fall down
network marketing things fall down
network marketing things fall down because people like to buy from people
because people like to buy from people
because people like to buy from people and so I would want to see your story
and so I would want to see your story
and so I would want to see your story you know if I click here on your name or
you know if I click here on your name or
you know if I click here on your name or maybe here underneath this put LG Walker
maybe here underneath this put LG Walker
maybe here underneath this put LG Walker big smiling face how you got started why
big smiling face how you got started why
big smiling face how you got started why you love this business how much money
you love this business how much money
you love this business how much money you’re making our new people that you
you’re making our new people that you
you’re making our new people that you signed up and why you’re excited about
signed up and why you’re excited about
signed up and why you’re excited about this opportunity the more you can make
this opportunity the more you can make
this opportunity the more you can make it personal and make people want to be
it personal and make people want to be
it personal and make people want to be like you then the more likely they’re
like you then the more likely they’re
like you then the more likely they’re going to want to take the next step and
going to want to take the next step and
going to want to take the next step and do whatever it is that you want them to
do whatever it is that you want them to
do whatever it is that you want them to do so I definitely try to improve on
do so I definitely try to improve on
do so I definitely try to improve on that section hopefully as an option to
that section hopefully as an option to
that section hopefully as an option to edit the page table to put your own
edit the page table to put your own
edit the page table to put your own story in there often on these types of
story in there often on these types of
story in there often on these types of sites that are given by the company it’s
sites that are given by the company it’s
sites that are given by the company it’s not possible so you have to create your
not possible so you have to create your
not possible so you have to create your own website to do it but it’s definitely
own website to do it but it’s definitely
own website to do it but it’s definitely worth putting in the time to try to
worth putting in the time to try to
worth putting in the time to try to figure that out because it can make a
figure that out because it can make a
figure that out because it can make a huge difference on your conversions
huge difference on your conversions
huge difference on your conversions having that you’re kind of stock Corp
having that you’re kind of stock Corp
having that you’re kind of stock Corp corporate site versus having something
corporate site versus having something
corporate site versus having something that clearly explains your story and why
that clearly explains your story and why
that clearly explains your story and why you’re excited about
you’re excited about
you’re excited about so let’s learn a little bit more let’s
so let’s learn a little bit more let’s
so let’s learn a little bit more let’s check out the compensation see what
check out the compensation see what
check out the compensation see what these guys are all about so let’s see
these guys are all about so let’s see
these guys are all about so let’s see how we can make money different ways
how we can make money different ways
how we can make money different ways direct sales overrides matrix reward
direct sales overrides matrix reward
direct sales overrides matrix reward bonus residual income is always
bonus residual income is always
bonus residual income is always something people are looking for so
something people are looking for so
something people are looking for so here’s an example of money you can make
here’s an example of money you can make
here’s an example of money you can make so we get advanced Commission Commission
so we get advanced Commission Commission
so we get advanced Commission Commission grains per week per month per year and
grains per week per month per year and
grains per week per month per year and this is great if you can make money on
this is great if you can make money on
this is great if you can make money on an ongoing basis from signing somebody
an ongoing basis from signing somebody
an ongoing basis from signing somebody up it’s always a much more attractive
up it’s always a much more attractive
up it’s always a much more attractive option for people to want to join this
option for people to want to join this
option for people to want to join this kind of thing and make a business from
kind of thing and make a business from
kind of thing and make a business from it and that should probably be
it and that should probably be
it and that should probably be highlighted on the homepage right away
highlighted on the homepage right away
highlighted on the homepage right away there’s an opportunity to make recurring
there’s an opportunity to make recurring
there’s an opportunity to make recurring income from one time sales because a lot
income from one time sales because a lot
income from one time sales because a lot of these programs you have to keep
of these programs you have to keep
of these programs you have to keep selling new people in order to make any
selling new people in order to make any
selling new people in order to make any kind of money so this is you know every
kind of money so this is you know every
kind of money so this is you know every year this is a potential lifetime
year this is a potential lifetime
year this is a potential lifetime benefit to them as long as these people
benefit to them as long as these people
benefit to them as long as these people stay as part of the program that’s a
stay as part of the program that’s a
stay as part of the program that’s a huge option that’s a huge selling point
huge option that’s a huge selling point
huge option that’s a huge selling point for anybody who’s considering joining
for anybody who’s considering joining
for anybody who’s considering joining this kind of program so I again find a
this kind of program so I again find a
this kind of program so I again find a way to put that in here or maybe that’s
way to put that in here or maybe that’s
way to put that in here or maybe that’s why you signed up and you can put that
why you signed up and you can put that
why you signed up and you can put that as part of your story but that’s
as part of your story but that’s
as part of your story but that’s definitely a big benefit that should be
definitely a big benefit that should be
definitely a big benefit that should be highlighted and somebody who’s
highlighted and somebody who’s
highlighted and somebody who’s considering joining this program that
considering joining this program that
considering joining this program that would be a big selling point for them
would be a big selling point for them
would be a big selling point for them let’s go down to testimonials and see
let’s go down to testimonials and see
let’s go down to testimonials and see what you have here so this page looks
what you have here so this page looks
what you have here so this page looks blank so it says my story which really
blank so it says my story which really
blank so it says my story which really should say testimonials but it looks
should say testimonials but it looks
should say testimonials but it looks like you have a place here to tell your
like you have a place here to tell your
like you have a place here to tell your story which is great so you want to use
story which is great so you want to use
story which is great so you want to use this put a picture you know nice smiling
this put a picture you know nice smiling
this put a picture you know nice smiling picture trustworthy happy person loves
picture trustworthy happy person loves
picture trustworthy happy person loves their business and talk about how you
their business and talk about how you
their business and talk about how you got started you know why you love this
got started you know why you love this
got started you know why you love this business what did you hope to do when
business what did you hope to do when
business what did you hope to do when you first started signed up for it why
you first started signed up for it why
you first started signed up for it why is it exciting for you what kind of
is it exciting for you what kind of
is it exciting for you what kind of early results have you had you don’t
early results have you had you don’t
early results have you had you don’t have to be killing it yet but showing
have to be killing it yet but showing
have to be killing it yet but showing some early results even or talk about
some early results even or talk about
some early results even or talk about how you got your first sale and how
how you got your first sale and how
how you got your first sale and how excited you felt about it and how you
excited you felt about it and how you
excited you felt about it and how you know you’re going to be building your
know you’re going to be building your
know you’re going to be building your business from this and building
business from this and building
business from this and building income and supporting your family from
income and supporting your family from
income and supporting your family from this that kind of excitement gets people
this that kind of excitement gets people
this that kind of excitement gets people going ties it to you and makes them want
going ties it to you and makes them want
going ties it to you and makes them want to be like you and so they’ll take the
to be like you and so they’ll take the
to be like you and so they’ll take the next step whatever it is a you a sin to
next step whatever it is a you a sin to
next step whatever it is a you a sin to take so overall good site hopefully that
take so overall good site hopefully that
take so overall good site hopefully that helps give you some suggestions for what
helps give you some suggestions for what
helps give you some suggestions for what to do next I think it is an interesting
to do next I think it is an interesting
to do next I think it is an interesting opportunity but again you know clearly
opportunity but again you know clearly
opportunity but again you know clearly explain one line what it is that this is
explain one line what it is that this is
explain one line what it is that this is all about and if you can put pictures
all about and if you can put pictures
all about and if you can put pictures that’d be great but the biggest thing
that’d be great but the biggest thing
that’d be great but the biggest thing missing is still your story and creating
missing is still your story and creating
missing is still your story and creating an ongoing discussion if you can
an ongoing discussion if you can
an ongoing discussion if you can creating content whether their YouTube
creating content whether their YouTube
creating content whether their YouTube posts or blog posts or Twitter posts
posts or blog posts or Twitter posts
posts or blog posts or Twitter posts just hitting people over again with why
just hitting people over again with why
just hitting people over again with why you’re doing this and updating them with
you’re doing this and updating them with
you’re doing this and updating them with some of the progress and success that
some of the progress and success that
some of the progress and success that you’ve had as they see these messages
you’ve had as they see these messages
you’ve had as they see these messages keep coming at them they’re going to be
keep coming at them they’re going to be
keep coming at them they’re going to be interested in taking the next step in
interested in taking the next step in
interested in taking the next step in signing up one last thing you might want
signing up one last thing you might want
signing up one last thing you might want to do is create some kind of newsletter
to do is create some kind of newsletter
to do is create some kind of newsletter an option to leave their name and email
an option to leave their name and email
an option to leave their name and email address and you can contact them every
address and you can contact them every
address and you can contact them every so often if it’s once a week or every
so often if it’s once a week or every
so often if it’s once a week or every two weeks or every month with an update
two weeks or every month with an update
two weeks or every month with an update via email it could be hard for somebody
via email it could be hard for somebody
via email it could be hard for somebody to come here and want to just sign up
to come here and want to just sign up
to come here and want to just sign up right away and join but they’re more
right away and join but they’re more
right away and join but they’re more likely to leave their email for some
likely to leave their email for some
likely to leave their email for some kind of free report or free download and
kind of free report or free download and
kind of free report or free download and then you can start building a
then you can start building a
then you can start building a conversation with them and share things
conversation with them and share things
conversation with them and share things that inspire you and motivate you and
that inspire you and motivate you and
that inspire you and motivate you and again all the things that you’re doing
again all the things that you’re doing
again all the things that you’re doing to grow this business can help motivate
to grow this business can help motivate
to grow this business can help motivate them to want to sign up and sign up
them to want to sign up and sign up
them to want to sign up and sign up under your team specifically so
under your team specifically so
under your team specifically so hopefully they’ll help good luck with
hopefully they’ll help good luck with
hopefully they’ll help good luck with the business keep us posted I want to
the business keep us posted I want to
the business keep us posted I want to see how this thing how this thing goes
see how this thing how this thing goes
see how this thing how this thing goes for you for those of you watching if you
for you for those of you watching if you
for you for those of you watching if you liked the video please give it a thumbs
liked the video please give it a thumbs
liked the video please give it a thumbs up makes you want to do more for you and
up makes you want to do more for you and
up makes you want to do more for you and I’d love to hear we get to think if you
I’d love to hear we get to think if you
I’d love to hear we get to think if you won’t leave a comment under the video I
won’t leave a comment under the video I
won’t leave a comment under the video I always read those love seemed to come in
always read those love seemed to come in
always read those love seemed to come in so thank you and I’ll see you on the
so thank you and I’ll see you on the
so thank you and I’ll see you on the next episode
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