hey it’s evan and today i’m doing another one of my Fiverr gigs where i’m
another one of my Fiverr gigs where i’m
another one of my Fiverr gigs where i’m helping out a fellow entrepreneur giving
helping out a fellow entrepreneur giving
helping out a fellow entrepreneur giving them some feedback on their website
them some feedback on their website
them some feedback on their website today I have I bizcard who’s got a
today I have I bizcard who’s got a
today I have I bizcard who’s got a website ID card workshop com so if I pop
website ID card workshop com so if I pop
website ID card workshop com so if I pop it up here I look at ID card workshop
it up here I look at ID card workshop
it up here I look at ID card workshop the first thing that hits me is well I
the first thing that hits me is well I
the first thing that hits me is well I kind of get a sense of what they’re all
kind of get a sense of what they’re all
kind of get a sense of what they’re all about they’re making these ID cards but
about they’re making these ID cards but
about they’re making these ID cards but there’s a lot of content on this side
there’s a lot of content on this side
there’s a lot of content on this side this is this is hard to it’s hard on the
this is this is hard to it’s hard on the
this is this is hard to it’s hard on the eye and I guess it looks like they’re
eye and I guess it looks like they’re
eye and I guess it looks like they’re trying to pound in as much information
trying to pound in as much information
trying to pound in as much information as possible you don’t want people to
as possible you don’t want people to
as possible you don’t want people to miss anything but when you do that it’s
miss anything but when you do that it’s
miss anything but when you do that it’s so overwhelming that you’re not quite
so overwhelming that you’re not quite
so overwhelming that you’re not quite sure where to look so if I’m trying to
sure where to look so if I’m trying to
sure where to look so if I’m trying to figure out what this company does I’m
figure out what this company does I’m
figure out what this company does I’m sure it tells me here let’s read a
sure it tells me here let’s read a
sure it tells me here let’s read a little bit professional easy-to-use
little bit professional easy-to-use
little bit professional easy-to-use membership management an ID card
membership management an ID card
membership management an ID card software for business and organizations
software for business and organizations
software for business and organizations okay with this built-in okay look this
okay with this built-in okay look this
okay with this built-in okay look this is a long sentence with its built-in
is a long sentence with its built-in
is a long sentence with its built-in powerful multi-layer ID card designer
powerful multi-layer ID card designer
powerful multi-layer ID card designer various templates and samples ID card
various templates and samples ID card
various templates and samples ID card workshop enables you to create ID cards
workshop enables you to create ID cards
workshop enables you to create ID cards employee badges membership cards loyalty
employee badges membership cards loyalty
employee badges membership cards loyalty cards VP cars or any type of ID cards
cards VP cars or any type of ID cards
cards VP cars or any type of ID cards never never been easier so we have a
never never been easier so we have a
never never been easier so we have a grammatical error in there but these
grammatical error in there but these
grammatical error in there but these long sentences people do not want to
long sentences people do not want to
long sentences people do not want to read it this looks like it could be cool
read it this looks like it could be cool
read it this looks like it could be cool so if your business who has to manage
so if your business who has to manage
so if your business who has to manage the ID of the people coming in your
the ID of the people coming in your
the ID of the people coming in your employees or VIP cards at a club or
employees or VIP cards at a club or
employees or VIP cards at a club or whatever it is I don’t know how people
whatever it is I don’t know how people
whatever it is I don’t know how people go about creating them this is looks
go about creating them this is looks
go about creating them this is looks like a pretty cool software solution to
like a pretty cool software solution to
like a pretty cool software solution to help you out for the people who own this
help you out for the people who own this
help you out for the people who own this website to make it easier you need to
website to make it easier you need to
website to make it easier you need to simplify this I love you know this is a
simplify this I love you know this is a
simplify this I love you know this is a great picture that shows what you do a
great picture that shows what you do a
great picture that shows what you do a little bit but this text is out of
little bit but this text is out of
little bit but this text is out of control people are not going to read all
control people are not going to read all
control people are not going to read all of this stuff so you want to simplify it
of this stuff so you want to simplify it
of this stuff so you want to simplify it come up with two three main things that
come up with two three main things that
come up with two three main things that you can do and how it helps and make
you can do and how it helps and make
you can do and how it helps and make that easy to understand I like that you
that easy to understand I like that you
that easy to understand I like that you have some screenshot so I can kind of
have some screenshot so I can kind of
have some screenshot so I can kind of look at what your software can do let’s
look at what your software can do let’s
look at what your software can do let’s click on one card design so I could put
click on one card design so I could put
click on one card design so I could put in their picture name all that
in their picture name all that
in their picture name all that information the software actually looks
information the software actually looks
information the software actually looks easy to use a software is easier to look
easy to use a software is easier to look
easy to use a software is easier to look at than the website right nice buttons
at than the website right nice buttons
at than the website right nice buttons clearly defined
clearly defined
clearly defined super easy I get a better sense of what
super easy I get a better sense of what
super easy I get a better sense of what you’re doing by looking at the screen
you’re doing by looking at the screen
you’re doing by looking at the screen shots then reading this website full of
shots then reading this website full of
shots then reading this website full of text so something to think about you
text so something to think about you
text so something to think about you guys have some skills to make this just
guys have some skills to make this just
guys have some skills to make this just apply your software skills over to your
apply your software skills over to your
apply your software skills over to your website some partners you know I don’t
website some partners you know I don’t
website some partners you know I don’t know any of these names but maybe that
know any of these names but maybe that
know any of these names but maybe that means something to some people it’s
means something to some people it’s
means something to some people it’s great do you have some you know some
great do you have some you know some
great do you have some you know some press it’s great to see Yahoo Boston com
press it’s great to see Yahoo Boston com
press it’s great to see Yahoo Boston com we’ve got a little bit of some publicity
we’ve got a little bit of some publicity
we’ve got a little bit of some publicity there so that’s great my next step here
there so that’s great my next step here
there so that’s great my next step here would be the two down little purchase so
would be the two down little purchase so
would be the two down little purchase so it’s great let’s see how much the same
it’s great let’s see how much the same
it’s great let’s see how much the same cause so looks like i have two options
cause so looks like i have two options
cause so looks like i have two options here 30-day license for fifteen bucks a
here 30-day license for fifteen bucks a
here 30-day license for fifteen bucks a month or single unlimited license for
month or single unlimited license for
month or single unlimited license for 180 bucks total I don’t know what this
180 bucks total I don’t know what this
180 bucks total I don’t know what this kind of stuff costs but it doesn’t seem
kind of stuff costs but it doesn’t seem
kind of stuff costs but it doesn’t seem to me like that’s crazy unreasonable for
to me like that’s crazy unreasonable for
to me like that’s crazy unreasonable for people who really need to have ID cards
people who really need to have ID cards
people who really need to have ID cards in their businesses for whatever reason
in their businesses for whatever reason
in their businesses for whatever reason to be able to get away with it at 180
to be able to get away with it at 180
to be able to get away with it at 180 bucks doesn’t seem like it’s too crazy
bucks doesn’t seem like it’s too crazy
bucks doesn’t seem like it’s too crazy considering all the stuff you go through
considering all the stuff you go through
considering all the stuff you go through here I think the biggest challenge here
here I think the biggest challenge here
here I think the biggest challenge here for the the business owner is to make
for the the business owner is to make
for the the business owner is to make this easier to understand so when people
this easier to understand so when people
this easier to understand so when people come here they quickly get a sense of
come here they quickly get a sense of
come here they quickly get a sense of what you’re all about and want to make a
what you’re all about and want to make a
what you’re all about and want to make a decision to buy I’d love to see a little
decision to buy I’d love to see a little
decision to buy I’d love to see a little bit more about who’s behind this company
bit more about who’s behind this company
bit more about who’s behind this company so you know why did you start this
so you know why did you start this
so you know why did you start this what’s your background who are the
what’s your background who are the
what’s your background who are the people again people like to buy from
people again people like to buy from
people again people like to buy from people so share your story show your
people so share your story show your
people so share your story show your smiling face tell me why you started
smiling face tell me why you started
smiling face tell me why you started this business why it’s important to you
this business why it’s important to you
this business why it’s important to you if you can get people to read that then
if you can get people to read that then
if you can get people to read that then they’re more likely to want to buy from
they’re more likely to want to buy from
they’re more likely to want to buy from you instead of going to some other
you instead of going to some other
you instead of going to some other company so something about about the
company so something about about the
company so something about about the business maybe I’m missing it maybe
business maybe I’m missing it maybe
business maybe I’m missing it maybe there’s something at the bottom no
there’s something at the bottom no
there’s something at the bottom no nothing here press room so it means
nothing here press room so it means
nothing here press room so it means great you’re getting some press but
great you’re getting some press but
great you’re getting some press but again i’d love to see some more
again i’d love to see some more
again i’d love to see some more information about you guys whoever the
information about you guys whoever the
information about you guys whoever the founder is here take a picture make a
founder is here take a picture make a
founder is here take a picture make a video if you’re up for it and go from
video if you’re up for it and go from
video if you’re up for it and go from there be great to see that information
there be great to see that information
there be great to see that information so but overall number one most important
so but overall number one most important
so but overall number one most important thing clean this up make it look like
thing clean this up make it look like
thing clean this up make it look like your software make it as easy to use as
your software make it as easy to use as
your software make it as easy to use as your software and you get more people
your software and you get more people
your software and you get more people buying thanks for the review our if you
buying thanks for the review our if you
buying thanks for the review our if you guys like this video give it a thumbs up
guys like this video give it a thumbs up
guys like this video give it a thumbs up below and I’d love to hear what you have
below and I’d love to hear what you have
below and I’d love to hear what you have to think about this website or if you
to think about this website or if you
to think about this website or if you have a question about your business
have a question about your business
have a question about your business leaving a comments below and I’ll make a
leaving a comments below and I’ll make a
leaving a comments below and I’ll make a video reply thank you so much
video reply thank you so much
video reply thank you so much much and I’ll see you soon
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