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Business Plan Presentation – Should I write my business plan in plain English? Ask Evan


hi I’m Evan Carmichael welcome to

hi I’m Evan Carmichael welcome to another edition of ask Evan today I’m

another edition of ask Evan today I’m

another edition of ask Evan today I’m going to answer a question from one of

going to answer a question from one of

going to answer a question from one of my youtube viewers a mirror who wrote it

my youtube viewers a mirror who wrote it

my youtube viewers a mirror who wrote it asking about business plans so he wrote

asking about business plans so he wrote

asking about business plans so he wrote saying hi Evan I absolutely love your

saying hi Evan I absolutely love your

saying hi Evan I absolutely love your videos when creating the business plan

videos when creating the business plan

videos when creating the business plan and I’m writing that does it have to be

and I’m writing that does it have to be

and I’m writing that does it have to be with all the confusing terms or can it

with all the confusing terms or can it

with all the confusing terms or can it be in plain English so thanks for the

be in plain English so thanks for the

be in plain English so thanks for the question Amir first of all of your

question Amir first of all of your

question Amir first of all of your business plan you never wanted to be

business plan you never wanted to be

business plan you never wanted to be confusing you don’t want to be confusing

confusing you don’t want to be confusing

confusing you don’t want to be confusing for you you aren’t be confusing for any

for you you aren’t be confusing for any

for you you aren’t be confusing for any of the readers so as much as you can put

of the readers so as much as you can put

of the readers so as much as you can put it in plain English plain language so

it in plain English plain language so

it in plain English plain language so that everybody can understand it

that everybody can understand it

that everybody can understand it depending what your plan is the for the

depending what your plan is the for the

depending what your plan is the for the business plan is it’s something that

business plan is it’s something that

business plan is it’s something that you’re just going to use internally to

you’re just going to use internally to

you’re just going to use internally to help you build your business or if

help you build your business or if

help you build your business or if you’re also going to use it to go and

you’re also going to use it to go and

you’re also going to use it to go and get investors or that you get a bank

get investors or that you get a bank

get investors or that you get a bank loan it’s gonna be read by other people

loan it’s gonna be read by other people

loan it’s gonna be read by other people then you really have to make sure it’s

then you really have to make sure it’s

then you really have to make sure it’s in plain English because they’re not

in plain English because they’re not

in plain English because they’re not going to know your business as well as

going to know your business as well as

going to know your business as well as you do so quick example when I was in

you do so quick example when I was in

you do so quick example when I was in the venture capital business I got so

the venture capital business I got so

the venture capital business I got so many business plans people wanting to

many business plans people wanting to

many business plans people wanting to get funding and a lot of it was not in

get funding and a lot of it was not in

get funding and a lot of it was not in plain English it was a very technical a

plain English it was a very technical a

plain English it was a very technical a lot of people with great new

lot of people with great new

lot of people with great new technologies and I’m sure to them when

technologies and I’m sure to them when

technologies and I’m sure to them when they read over their business plan it

they read over their business plan it

they read over their business plan it made a lot of sense like this is what we

made a lot of sense like this is what we

made a lot of sense like this is what we do but for somebody who is looking at it

do but for somebody who is looking at it

do but for somebody who is looking at it doesn’t know your business it’s a lot of

doesn’t know your business it’s a lot of

doesn’t know your business it’s a lot of technical jargon so you want to make

technical jargon so you want to make

technical jargon so you want to make sure that you can you can really put it

sure that you can you can really put it

sure that you can you can really put it in simple terms easy to understand that

in simple terms easy to understand that

in simple terms easy to understand that anybody can understand a lot of these

anybody can understand a lot of these

anybody can understand a lot of these bankers investors they may be

bankers investors they may be

bankers investors they may be knowledgeable but you’re in the stream

knowledgeable but you’re in the stream

knowledgeable but you’re in the stream but they’re not going to know it as well

but they’re not going to know it as well

but they’re not going to know it as well as you will know it so it’s really

as you will know it so it’s really

as you will know it so it’s really important to put it in terms that

important to put it in terms that

important to put it in terms that everybody can understand so for those

everybody can understand so for those

everybody can understand so for those ones usually they got rejected sometimes

ones usually they got rejected sometimes

ones usually they got rejected sometimes if we saw something we might you know

if we saw something we might you know

if we saw something we might you know bring them in but for the most part it’s

bring them in but for the most part it’s

bring them in but for the most part it’s the ones who had the really clear no

the ones who had the really clear no

the ones who had the really clear no simple to understand business plans that

simple to understand business plans that

simple to understand business plans that we call them to be able to meet them

we call them to be able to meet them

we call them to be able to meet them because we understood what they do and

because we understood what they do and

because we understood what they do and they clearly explained their value

they clearly explained their value

they clearly explained their value proposition so hopefully that helps one

proposition so hopefully that helps one

proposition so hopefully that helps one last thing when we look that business

last thing when we look that business

last thing when we look that business plans there’s a term within the venture

plans there’s a term within the venture

plans there’s a term within the venture capital industry called the grandmother

capital industry called the grandmother

capital industry called the grandmother test and it basically means is your

test and it basically means is your

test and it basically means is your business plan written so that your

business plan written so that your

business plan written so that your grandmother can understand it and you

grandmother can understand it and you

grandmother can understand it and you know great task

know great task

know great task once you finish your business plan show

once you finish your business plan show

once you finish your business plan show it to your grandmother show it to your

it to your grandmother show it to your

it to your grandmother show it to your friends and family people kind of know

friends and family people kind of know

friends and family people kind of know what you do but they don’t know the

what you do but they don’t know the

what you do but they don’t know the specifics and not technical people show

specifics and not technical people show

specifics and not technical people show it to them and if they can understand

it to them and if they can understand

it to them and if they can understand what the opportunity is and how you

what the opportunity is and how you

what the opportunity is and how you solve a problem and are able to really

solve a problem and are able to really

solve a problem and are able to really help people but they can get that from

help people but they can get that from

help people but they can get that from your business plan then you’re ready to

your business plan then you’re ready to

your business plan then you’re ready to start giving it to investors and bankers

start giving it to investors and bankers

start giving it to investors and bankers if they read it and they have still no

if they read it and they have still no

if they read it and they have still no idea what you do then it’s time to go

idea what you do then it’s time to go

idea what you do then it’s time to go back to the drawing board and recreate

back to the drawing board and recreate

back to the drawing board and recreate it especially that executive summary

it especially that executive summary

it especially that executive summary that first part the executive summary is

that first part the executive summary is

that first part the executive summary is really important that’s the first thing

really important that’s the first thing

really important that’s the first thing that somebody’s going to read if they

that somebody’s going to read if they

that somebody’s going to read if they can’t understand the exec summary then

can’t understand the exec summary then

can’t understand the exec summary then forget it you’re gone usually look at

forget it you’re gone usually look at

forget it you’re gone usually look at the exec summary then we look at the

the exec summary then we look at the

the exec summary then we look at the management team and see who’s behind it

management team and see who’s behind it

management team and see who’s behind it and then we look at the financials and

and then we look at the financials and

and then we look at the financials and if all that made sense then we start

if all that made sense then we start

if all that made sense then we start reading the rest of the business plan so

reading the rest of the business plan so

reading the rest of the business plan so really make sure that your executive

really make sure that your executive

really make sure that your executive summary is especially written in plain

summary is especially written in plain

summary is especially written in plain English so that helps them here if you

English so that helps them here if you

English so that helps them here if you guys like the video for you who are

guys like the video for you who are

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watching please give it a thumbs up

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below it helps you know which readers

below it helps you know which readers you like and which ones you don’t like

you like and which ones you don’t like

you like and which ones you don’t like as much but I was like making these

as much but I was like making these

as much but I was like making these videos and appreciate seeing those

videos and appreciate seeing those

videos and appreciate seeing those thumbs up come in and if you have a

thumbs up come in and if you have a

thumbs up come in and if you have a thought about business plans you want to

thought about business plans you want to

thought about business plans you want to add something to this video to help a

add something to this video to help a

add something to this video to help a mere or you have another question for me

mere or you have another question for me

mere or you have another question for me feel free to leave it in the comment

feel free to leave it in the comment

feel free to leave it in the comment section below I always read those so

section below I always read those so

section below I always read those so thank you and we’ll see you on the next

thank you and we’ll see you on the next

thank you and we’ll see you on the next episode

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