we’re good okay so happy here Freddie uh we are on with jen again to get her
we are on with jen again to get her
we are on with jen again to get her status update jen how you doing I’m
status update jen how you doing I’m
status update jen how you doing I’m doing great thank you we’re really busy
doing great thank you we’re really busy
doing great thank you we’re really busy I’m at a coffee shop right now can you
I’m at a coffee shop right now can you
I’m at a coffee shop right now can you hear me okay yeah I can hear you what is
hear me okay yeah I can hear you what is
hear me okay yeah I can hear you what is the closest is like room or something
the closest is like room or something
the closest is like room or something behind you there yeah there’s like a
behind you there yeah there’s like a
behind you there yeah there’s like a club that I take it says mechanical room
club that I take it says mechanical room
club that I take it says mechanical room it’s all right there like a little couch
it’s all right there like a little couch
it’s all right there like a little couch in the corner and I grabbed it so I can
in the corner and I grabbed it so I can
in the corner and I grabbed it so I can you know feel like I have a little area
you know feel like I have a little area
you know feel like I have a little area here mamuka room okay i just finished a
here mamuka room okay i just finished a
here mamuka room okay i just finished a one-on-one hang out at my condo and then
one-on-one hang out at my condo and then
one-on-one hang out at my condo and then ran do this so for the people who are
ran do this so for the people who are
ran do this so for the people who are watching you just watched last one i’m
watching you just watched last one i’m
watching you just watched last one i’m now at the office of the back drive is
now at the office of the back drive is
now at the office of the back drive is changing okay so it’s been a while ah
changing okay so it’s been a while ah
changing okay so it’s been a while ah December twelfth of their last one we I
December twelfth of their last one we I
December twelfth of their last one we I know it doesn’t seem like it’s been that
know it doesn’t seem like it’s been that
know it doesn’t seem like it’s been that long I think that the holidays is just
long I think that the holidays is just
long I think that the holidays is just been busy because i feel like i just
been busy because i feel like i just
been busy because i feel like i just talked to you which is great what’s
talked to you which is great what’s
talked to you which is great what’s going on give me the update well I just
going on give me the update well I just
going on give me the update well I just been super busy rice and copy and um
been super busy rice and copy and um
been super busy rice and copy and um kind of based on our last conversation
kind of based on our last conversation
kind of based on our last conversation kind of looking at more ways to
kind of looking at more ways to
kind of looking at more ways to incorporate fantasy into my bio and into
incorporate fantasy into my bio and into
incorporate fantasy into my bio and into twitter updates and facebook updates and
twitter updates and facebook updates and
twitter updates and facebook updates and that kind of thing so I’ve been doing a
that kind of thing so I’ve been doing a
that kind of thing so I’ve been doing a lot of that and and just writing a lot
lot of that and and just writing a lot
lot of that and and just writing a lot of coffee it’s been great so did you did
of coffee it’s been great so did you did
of coffee it’s been great so did you did you change your home page um I did I did
you change your home page um I did I did
you change your home page um I did I did so on my you so much calm website
so on my you so much calm website
so on my you so much calm website there’s a new header on there I still
there’s a new header on there I still
there’s a new header on there I still need to incorporate some copy but um
need to incorporate some copy but um
need to incorporate some copy but um there’s new header on there that says
there’s new header on there that says
there’s new header on there that says fantasy copywriter and underneath that I
fantasy copywriter and underneath that I
fantasy copywriter and underneath that I new tagline to said words make it real
new tagline to said words make it real
new tagline to said words make it real words make it real okay no i’m gonna go
words make it real okay no i’m gonna go
words make it real okay no i’m gonna go i’m gonna go we’re gonna screen share
i’m gonna go we’re gonna screen share
i’m gonna go we’re gonna screen share this all right let’s see green show you
this all right let’s see green show you
this all right let’s see green show you so much there we go you see it I can’t
so much there we go you see it I can’t
so much there we go you see it I can’t see it oh really when you see military
see it oh really when you see military
see it oh really when you see military go no it see it there yes you so much
go no it see it there yes you so much
go no it see it there yes you so much meet there you are okay fantasy
meet there you are okay fantasy
meet there you are okay fantasy copywriting words make it real and then
copywriting words make it real and then
copywriting words make it real and then what about the rest of this has this
what about the rest of this has this
what about the rest of this has this been updated are you still going to I
been updated are you still going to I
been updated are you still going to I still need to update that yeah okay and
still need to update that yeah okay and
still need to update that yeah okay and be about or anything else yeah I need to
be about or anything else yeah I need to
be about or anything else yeah I need to be a bad the about is actually ok i just
be a bad the about is actually ok i just
be a bad the about is actually ok i just think any didn’t corpora
think any didn’t corpora
think any didn’t corpora if you see into a little bit more um so
if you see into a little bit more um so
if you see into a little bit more um so my homepage i think i need is we’re
my homepage i think i need is we’re
my homepage i think i need is we’re really gonna make most achieve right
really gonna make most achieve right
really gonna make most achieve right okay yeah makes sense i mean you mean
okay yeah makes sense i mean you mean
okay yeah makes sense i mean you mean you do see that you so much that the the
you do see that you so much that the the
you do see that you so much that the the fantasy part is is kind of small
fantasy part is is kind of small
fantasy part is is kind of small compared to everything else and kind of
compared to everything else and kind of
compared to everything else and kind of lost right what if you keep doing it
lost right what if you keep doing it
lost right what if you keep doing it more you know as part of everything you
more you know as part of everything you
more you know as part of everything you do then you’ll be hit asleep yes exactly
do then you’ll be hit asleep yes exactly
do then you’ll be hit asleep yes exactly let me turn there we go back to me okay
let me turn there we go back to me okay
let me turn there we go back to me okay so what else and and then um i also did
so what else and and then um i also did
so what else and and then um i also did several posts on twitter using theistic
several posts on twitter using theistic
several posts on twitter using theistic quotes and that is kind of cool too
quotes and that is kind of cool too
quotes and that is kind of cool too because i tried to do some searches too
because i tried to do some searches too
because i tried to do some searches too especially with some of people that i
especially with some of people that i
especially with some of people that i follow them to follow me and see if they
follow them to follow me and see if they
follow them to follow me and see if they ever use fantasy and it’s funny because
ever use fantasy and it’s funny because
ever use fantasy and it’s funny because most of the time when people use the
most of the time when people use the
most of the time when people use the word fantasy they were using it for my
word fantasy they were using it for my
word fantasy they were using it for my canon see sports games football or they
canon see sports games football or they
canon see sports games football or they were using it for the fantasy novel
were using it for the fantasy novel
were using it for the fantasy novel genre so like a lot of policy writers
genre so like a lot of policy writers
genre so like a lot of policy writers don’t use it yeah okay yeah so it was
don’t use it yeah okay yeah so it was
don’t use it yeah okay yeah so it was great though because I thought I
great though because I thought I
great though because I thought I couldn’t see any copywriters using it at
couldn’t see any copywriters using it at
couldn’t see any copywriters using it at all so I love that it’s a little unique
all so I love that it’s a little unique
all so I love that it’s a little unique to copy writing so and I also get a
to copy writing so and I also get a
to copy writing so and I also get a search on Google too and same thing I
search on Google too and same thing I
search on Google too and same thing I didn’t really see it refer to any
didn’t really see it refer to any
didn’t really see it refer to any copywriting right okay let’s let’s see
copywriting right okay let’s let’s see
copywriting right okay let’s let’s see your tweets oh boy I want to see things
your tweets oh boy I want to see things
your tweets oh boy I want to see things what do we say this is the one a day
what do we say this is the one a day
what do we say this is the one a day what did we say here well this is what a
what did we say here well this is what a
what did we say here well this is what a week we said what a week but i just i
week we said what a week but i just i
week we said what a week but i just i did a little bit more than I’ve never
did a little bit more than I’ve never
did a little bit more than I’ve never won a week okay it’s very ok uh how do I
won a week okay it’s very ok uh how do I
won a week okay it’s very ok uh how do I get through Twitter contact and I’m at
get through Twitter contact and I’m at
get through Twitter contact and I’m at rock star jen says oh here is this it
rock star jen says oh here is this it
rock star jen says oh here is this it yeah just click on my Twitter yeah and I
yeah just click on my Twitter yeah and I
yeah just click on my Twitter yeah and I still have to change my twitter handle
still have to change my twitter handle
still have to change my twitter handle we talked about that a little bit no I
we talked about that a little bit no I
we talked about that a little bit no I got it yet very good at but I did shake
got it yet very good at but I did shake
got it yet very good at but I did shake my bio a little bit so you can see it’s
my bio a little bit so you can see it’s
my bio a little bit so you can see it’s a fancy copywriter on there okay cool
a fancy copywriter on there okay cool
a fancy copywriter on there okay cool dream taller okay and then 3 2 1 happy
dream taller okay and then 3 2 1 happy
dream taller okay and then 3 2 1 happy new year where is that day when fantasy
new year where is that day when fantasy
new year where is that day when fantasy turns you on your community garden into
turns you on your community garden into
turns you on your community garden into such good friends so you’re putting
such good friends so you’re putting
such good friends so you’re putting holes of other people good okay oh you
holes of other people good okay oh you
holes of other people good okay oh you retweeted my stuff I did okay then I
retweeted my stuff I did okay then I
retweeted my stuff I did okay then I like that one yeah oh cool I didn’t
like that one yeah oh cool I didn’t
like that one yeah oh cool I didn’t skate from reality to live understand
skate from reality to live understand
skate from reality to live understand you so
you so
you so these just quotes that you found that
these just quotes that you found that
these just quotes that you found that spoke to you is that what happened yeah
spoke to you is that what happened yeah
spoke to you is that what happened yeah exactly I found close to spoke to me and
exactly I found close to spoke to me and
exactly I found close to spoke to me and I had a couple people retweet which was
I had a couple people retweet which was
I had a couple people retweet which was kind of cool yeah and then I found other
kind of cool yeah and then I found other
kind of cool yeah and then I found other quotes the people that were related like
quotes the people that were related like
quotes the people that were related like I think one of them I’m trying over one
I think one of them I’m trying over one
I think one of them I’m trying over one of them was referring to dream instead
of them was referring to dream instead
of them was referring to dream instead of um instead of fantasy but it was
of um instead of fantasy but it was
of um instead of fantasy but it was close enough to kind of my philosophy
close enough to kind of my philosophy
close enough to kind of my philosophy that I i retweeted a couple things that
that I i retweeted a couple things that
that I i retweeted a couple things that were you know that were similar whoa
were you know that were similar whoa
were you know that were similar whoa okay yeah um what might help is if you
okay yeah um what might help is if you
okay yeah um what might help is if you find clothes that you like this is a
find clothes that you like this is a
find clothes that you like this is a good picture version of it will have a
good picture version of it will have a
good picture version of it will have a lot bigger impact than just perform
lot bigger impact than just perform
lot bigger impact than just perform itself yeah so like this one here I
itself yeah so like this one here I
itself yeah so like this one here I wrote the quote in the sweet but then
wrote the quote in the sweet but then
wrote the quote in the sweet but then also included okay has a much bigger
also included okay has a much bigger
also included okay has a much bigger lift so that mean is not always a
lift so that mean is not always a
lift so that mean is not always a picture to go with every vote but if you
picture to go with every vote but if you
picture to go with every vote but if you find anything fantasy related that you
find anything fantasy related that you
find anything fantasy related that you like that also has a picture with it
like that also has a picture with it
like that also has a picture with it those tend to get a lot better response
those tend to get a lot better response
those tend to get a lot better response okay that’s good and anytime I see a
okay that’s good and anytime I see a
okay that’s good and anytime I see a quote that has believe in it I’ll
quote that has believe in it I’ll
quote that has believe in it I’ll usually switch this here uh-huh I’ll
usually switch this here uh-huh I’ll
usually switch this here uh-huh I’ll make that a hashtag okay see okay
make that a hashtag okay see okay
make that a hashtag okay see okay because what might happen if somebody
because what might happen if somebody
because what might happen if somebody retweets you and your fantasies just at
retweets you and your fantasies just at
retweets you and your fantasies just at the end they they may lose that hashtag
the end they they may lose that hashtag
the end they they may lose that hashtag in the tweet because it’s cut down or
in the tweet because it’s cut down or
in the tweet because it’s cut down or yeah you name in their soup okay um
yeah you name in their soup okay um
yeah you name in their soup okay um anyway little quick tricks your Twitter
anyway little quick tricks your Twitter
anyway little quick tricks your Twitter but this is yes sorry I would love to
but this is yes sorry I would love to
but this is yes sorry I would love to see your own stuff to write so not just
see your own stuff to write so not just
see your own stuff to write so not just quote some other people but uh but this
quote some other people but uh but this
quote some other people but uh but this is definitely a good start this is good
is definitely a good start this is good
is definitely a good start this is good this is good okay good okay let’s flip
this is good okay good okay let’s flip
this is good okay good okay let’s flip back and it’s good to you’re getting
back and it’s good to you’re getting
back and it’s good to you’re getting some applause whoo whoo whoo the type of
some applause whoo whoo whoo the type of
some applause whoo whoo whoo the type of people including you I had a couple
people including you I had a couple
people including you I had a couple people from my own actually spending it
people from my own actually spending it
people from my own actually spending it first it was something I thought I
first it was something I thought I
first it was something I thought I didn’t know but I realized it wasn’t me
didn’t know but I realized it wasn’t me
didn’t know but I realized it wasn’t me for my writing group head retweeted make
for my writing group head retweeted make
for my writing group head retweeted make perfect somebody that I just didn’t know
perfect somebody that I just didn’t know
perfect somebody that I just didn’t know retweeted me too and I just I started
retweeted me too and I just I started
retweeted me too and I just I started following her okay yeah good cool it’s
following her okay yeah good cool it’s
following her okay yeah good cool it’s starting it’s dirty yeah it’s good okay
starting it’s dirty yeah it’s good okay
starting it’s dirty yeah it’s good okay uh so domain name social-media handles
uh so domain name social-media handles
uh so domain name social-media handles that still ask yeah yeah
that still ask yeah yeah
that still ask yeah yeah I still like you so much but I think I’m
I still like you so much but I think I’m
I still like you so much but I think I’m gonna change my twitter handle so it’s
gonna change my twitter handle so it’s
gonna change my twitter handle so it’s it’s not rock star time it’ll be more
it’s not rock star time it’ll be more
it’s not rock star time it’ll be more around you so much i think or much right
around you so much i think or much right
around you so much i think or much right they have all these different uh right
they have all these different uh right
they have all these different uh right too many different ones yeah yeah okay
too many different ones yeah yeah okay
too many different ones yeah yeah okay uh how is the chatting I mean I know
uh how is the chatting I mean I know
uh how is the chatting I mean I know it’s been hard with holidays and
it’s been hard with holidays and
it’s been hard with holidays and everything but how is the talking with
everything but how is the talking with
everything but how is the talking with local business owners going um you know
local business owners going um you know
local business owners going um you know honestly not not not in a min much
honestly not not not in a min much
honestly not not not in a min much progress with the local business owners
progress with the local business owners
progress with the local business owners because of the holidays so but I have
because of the holidays so but I have
because of the holidays so but I have been working on some copy just on the
been working on some copy just on the
been working on some copy just on the side kind of for them and want to show
side kind of for them and want to show
side kind of for them and want to show them soon and so maybe even create a
them soon and so maybe even create a
them soon and so maybe even create a video around that which I was gonna ask
video around that which I was gonna ask
video around that which I was gonna ask you about cuz i know it was one of my
you about cuz i know it was one of my
you about cuz i know it was one of my assignments this week was to you know
assignments this week was to you know
assignments this week was to you know create a video around some copy i wrote
create a video around some copy i wrote
create a video around some copy i wrote for my aspirational client which was not
for my aspirational client which was not
for my aspirational client which was not true and company lingerie company and i
true and company lingerie company and i
true and company lingerie company and i didn’t do it yet because i was like I
didn’t do it yet because i was like I
didn’t do it yet because i was like I gotta ask up and said his advice on this
gotta ask up and said his advice on this
gotta ask up and said his advice on this because i feel like its copyright so
because i feel like its copyright so
because i feel like its copyright so should probably have a lot of words on
should probably have a lot of words on
should probably have a lot of words on the screen rather than just me talking
the screen rather than just me talking
the screen rather than just me talking because i feel like it has more impact
because i feel like it has more impact
because i feel like it has more impact than someone’s reading it at the same
than someone’s reading it at the same
than someone’s reading it at the same time I also feel like when i watch your
time I also feel like when i watch your
time I also feel like when i watch your videos for example i think you have much
videos for example i think you have much
videos for example i think you have much more impact than you’re talking like I
more impact than you’re talking like I
more impact than you’re talking like I feel like if your personality comes
feel like if your personality comes
feel like if your personality comes through you know it’s really much more
through you know it’s really much more
through you know it’s really much more engaging and dynamic than just words on
engaging and dynamic than just words on
engaging and dynamic than just words on screen you know to mean and so I just
screen you know to mean and so I just
screen you know to mean and so I just kinda wanted to kind of get your advice
kinda wanted to kind of get your advice
kinda wanted to kind of get your advice on this cuz I know it’s a little
on this cuz I know it’s a little
on this cuz I know it’s a little different and not giving advice i’m sort
different and not giving advice i’m sort
different and not giving advice i’m sort of giving advice to this more it’s copy
of giving advice to this more it’s copy
of giving advice to this more it’s copy related right and and to the point of
related right and and to the point of
related right and and to the point of this is to establish yourself as an
this is to establish yourself as an
this is to establish yourself as an expert have an ongoing series here that
expert have an ongoing series here that
expert have an ongoing series here that maybe you help that client but in the
maybe you help that client but in the
maybe you help that client but in the process you’re helping a lot of other
process you’re helping a lot of other
process you’re helping a lot of other people right other business owners who
people right other business owners who
people right other business owners who might not be able to afford a copywriter
might not be able to afford a copywriter
might not be able to afford a copywriter i want it on their own or whatever right
i want it on their own or whatever right
i want it on their own or whatever right and so that that it’s okay i think to
and so that that it’s okay i think to
and so that that it’s okay i think to read the copy that is that you
read the copy that is that you
read the copy that is that you redesigned for them and to read the copy
redesigned for them and to read the copy
redesigned for them and to read the copy that that the original at the before and
that that the original at the before and
that that the original at the before and after yes hopeful for not to say here
after yes hopeful for not to say here
after yes hopeful for not to say here here’s the copy that they have now and
here’s the copy that they have now and
here’s the copy that they have now and here’s what i came up with and when
here’s what i came up with and when
here’s what i came up with and when you’re reading that you can even have it
you’re reading that you can even have it
you’re reading that you can even have it up on the screen if you want i don’t
up on the screen if you want i don’t
up on the screen if you want i don’t know you know if you have the I wouldn’t
know you know if you have the I wouldn’t
know you know if you have the I wouldn’t get so caught up in a video editing
get so caught up in a video editing
get so caught up in a video editing right prevents you from doing it even if
right prevents you from doing it even if
right prevents you from doing it even if you’re just reading it that’s fine I
you’re just reading it that’s fine I
you’re just reading it that’s fine I the value ID here is you explaining the
the value ID here is you explaining the
the value ID here is you explaining the problem and your thought process and
problem and your thought process and
problem and your thought process and what happened as a result oh ok it’s
what happened as a result oh ok it’s
what happened as a result oh ok it’s great to see the before and after but I
great to see the before and after but I
great to see the before and after but I want to walk me through why the before
want to walk me through why the before
want to walk me through why the before is wrong and why the after so much
is wrong and why the after so much
is wrong and why the after so much better ok and that’s come that you can
better ok and that’s come that you can
better ok and that’s come that you can you can get an idea in your head but you
you can get an idea in your head but you
you can get an idea in your head but you can’t really script that it’s not going
can’t really script that it’s not going
can’t really script that it’s not going to be a solid if you’re just reading
to be a solid if you’re just reading
to be a solid if you’re just reading that out tell but you’re reading
that out tell but you’re reading
that out tell but you’re reading something right yeah yeah what and if
something right yeah yeah what and if
something right yeah yeah what and if you’re honestly sitting down and you’re
you’re honestly sitting down and you’re
you’re honestly sitting down and you’re Rebecca do they have a website and
Rebecca do they have a website and
Rebecca do they have a website and didn’t have a flyer something that you
didn’t have a flyer something that you
didn’t have a flyer something that you can get ahold of yeah they have all they
can get ahold of yeah they have all they
can get ahold of yeah they have all they have a website yeah is that what you’re
have a website yeah is that what you’re
have a website yeah is that what you’re gonna be doing the copy for well they’re
gonna be doing the copy for well they’re
gonna be doing the copy for well they’re a copy it’s interesting because their
a copy it’s interesting because their
a copy it’s interesting because their home page of their website they’re
home page of their website they’re
home page of their website they’re copies really good but then when you
copies really good but then when you
copies really good but then when you click through to their products but the
click through to their products but the
click through to their products but the product descriptions are what’s missing
product descriptions are what’s missing
product descriptions are what’s missing I think that’s a good copy I mean it’s a
I think that’s a good copy I mean it’s a
I think that’s a good copy I mean it’s a DS ok it’s descriptive of the product
DS ok it’s descriptive of the product
DS ok it’s descriptive of the product but it’s not it’s not it’s famous you
but it’s not it’s not it’s famous you
but it’s not it’s not it’s famous you driven as as it could be you know
driven as as it could be you know
driven as as it could be you know there’s no story there um and so but
there’s no story there um and so but
there’s no story there um and so but their homepage copies awesome so it’s
their homepage copies awesome so it’s
their homepage copies awesome so it’s really just it makes a change that’s a
really just it makes a change that’s a
really just it makes a change that’s a lot which is awesome too but their
lot which is awesome too but their
lot which is awesome too but their product descriptions are to me kind of
product descriptions are to me kind of
product descriptions are to me kind of boring so we’re just looking at the
boring so we’re just looking at the
boring so we’re just looking at the website and not be oh not another blog
website and not be oh not another blog
website and not be oh not another blog or something like that right look ok I
or something like that right look ok I
or something like that right look ok I don’t even know if they do a catalog
don’t even know if they do a catalog
don’t even know if they do a catalog that’s a good question i’d be
that’s a good question i’d be
that’s a good question i’d be interesting to find out um because they
interesting to find out um because they
interesting to find out um because they do yeah i have a killing us all online
do yeah i have a killing us all online
do yeah i have a killing us all online ok um ok so what would be great to see
ok um ok so what would be great to see
ok um ok so what would be great to see is going to their website and clicking
is going to their website and clicking
is going to their website and clicking on a a page right you can even use this
on a a page right you can even use this
on a a page right you can even use this before to Google right just like I did a
before to Google right just like I did a
before to Google right just like I did a screen share right you can create a
screen share right you can create a
screen share right you can create a hangout on your own hey Stan I’m helping
hangout on your own hey Stan I’m helping
hangout on your own hey Stan I’m helping you know XYZ company and a talking for a
you know XYZ company and a talking for a
you know XYZ company and a talking for a while and then you switch the screen
while and then you switch the screen
while and then you switch the screen chair show their website and what’s
chair show their website and what’s
chair show their website and what’s wrong with it and then come back to you
wrong with it and then come back to you
wrong with it and then come back to you talking and then switch back course we
talking and then switch back course we
talking and then switch back course we do a little document or whatever you
do a little document or whatever you
do a little document or whatever you wrote the copy in so people can read
wrote the copy in so people can read
wrote the copy in so people can read along with you as you’re saying it
along with you as you’re saying it
along with you as you’re saying it okay and then come back to you and and
okay and then come back to you and and
okay and then come back to you and and round up the video so I don’t want it’s
round up the video so I don’t want it’s
round up the video so I don’t want it’s boring just to see that kind of here’s
boring just to see that kind of here’s
boring just to see that kind of here’s here’s what it is and who’s yeah I agree
here’s what it is and who’s yeah I agree
here’s what it is and who’s yeah I agree yeah some context because a lot of
yeah some context because a lot of
yeah some context because a lot of people watching may not fully understand
people watching may not fully understand
people watching may not fully understand everything that went into it right right
everything that went into it right right
everything that went into it right right so talk about the process a little bit
so talk about the process a little bit
so talk about the process a little bit too not just the reasoning behind it
too not just the reasoning behind it
too not just the reasoning behind it yeah yeah yeah exactly okay like it’s
yeah yeah yeah exactly okay like it’s
yeah yeah yeah exactly okay like it’s showing that you look your very
showing that you look your very
showing that you look your very approachable you’re warm it’s easy to
approachable you’re warm it’s easy to
approachable you’re warm it’s easy to relate to you and if all you’re doing is
relate to you and if all you’re doing is
relate to you and if all you’re doing is reading the copy of tickets pots right
reading the copy of tickets pots right
reading the copy of tickets pots right right absolutely are you ever you have a
right absolutely are you ever you have a
right absolutely are you ever you have a great personality that you don’t want to
great personality that you don’t want to
great personality that you don’t want to hide so um yeah that’s what I was
hide so um yeah that’s what I was
hide so um yeah that’s what I was struggling with because I feel like
struggling with because I feel like
struggling with because I feel like that’s what the same with you like I
that’s what the same with you like I
that’s what the same with you like I feel like you’re very your personality
feel like you’re very your personality
feel like you’re very your personality comes through in your videos and if I
comes through in your videos and if I
comes through in your videos and if I was just reading off the copy of you so
was just reading off the copy of you so
was just reading off the copy of you so boring so yeah I totally agree okay yeah
boring so yeah I totally agree okay yeah
boring so yeah I totally agree okay yeah so once I can happen I’m for sure gonna
so once I can happen I’m for sure gonna
so once I can happen I’m for sure gonna do it this time no really I am got it I
do it this time no really I am got it I
do it this time no really I am got it I appreciate your fresh cut I feel like
appreciate your fresh cut I feel like
appreciate your fresh cut I feel like I’ve direction now so um yeah I’ll do
I’ve direction now so um yeah I’ll do
I’ve direction now so um yeah I’ll do that in before our next session is the
that in before our next session is the
that in before our next session is the copy done some of it is it’s a process
copy done some of it is it’s a process
copy done some of it is it’s a process yeah yeah and you’re kicking one product
yeah yeah and you’re kicking one product
yeah yeah and you’re kicking one product description pig and you’re blowing it up
description pig and you’re blowing it up
description pig and you’re blowing it up yeah I’m thinking ticking actually maybe
yeah I’m thinking ticking actually maybe
yeah I’m thinking ticking actually maybe take taking three products you know just
take taking three products you know just
take taking three products you know just to show an example of how you know how
to show an example of how you know how
to show an example of how you know how you can create a little story penis t
you can create a little story penis t
you can create a little story penis t around a product description to make it
around a product description to make it
around a product description to make it so much more interesting have you
so much more interesting have you
so much more interesting have you thought about the story that you’re
thought about the story that you’re
thought about the story that you’re going to tell beyond just before and
going to tell beyond just before and
going to tell beyond just before and after with the facts no not until now
after with the facts no not until now
after with the facts no not until now but like I think your idea of talking
but like I think your idea of talking
but like I think your idea of talking about why it’s so much more appealing um
about why it’s so much more appealing um
about why it’s so much more appealing um and going to the process that i go
and going to the process that i go
and going to the process that i go through because when i go through a
through because when i go through a
through because when i go through a product description i’m looking at um
product description i’m looking at um
product description i’m looking at um you know like the actual the details of
you know like the actual the details of
you know like the actual the details of the product itself you know or the
the product itself you know or the
the product itself you know or the service define what it is and
service define what it is and
service define what it is and descriptive words that you know that
descriptive words that you know that
descriptive words that you know that relate to that and then create a little
relate to that and then create a little
relate to that and then create a little story around that and so i could talk
story around that and so i could talk
story around that and so i could talk about that and what how i go to that
about that and what how i go to that
about that and what how i go to that process and and then they’ll see why you
process and and then they’ll see why you
process and and then they’ll see why you know how I got there I guess essentially
know how I got there I guess essentially
know how I got there I guess essentially okay so too
okay so too
okay so too back it up and make it a little more
back it up and make it a little more
back it up and make it a little more personal more impactful for the viewer
personal more impactful for the viewer
personal more impactful for the viewer uh-huh I would start with Lynn a quick
uh-huh I would start with Lynn a quick
uh-huh I would start with Lynn a quick overview about yourself so hey I’m Jen
overview about yourself so hey I’m Jen
overview about yourself so hey I’m Jen I’m the fantasy copywriter I believe XYZ
I’m the fantasy copywriter I believe XYZ
I’m the fantasy copywriter I believe XYZ okay something passionate just to just
okay something passionate just to just
okay something passionate just to just to kick it off but I want like five
to kick it off but I want like five
to kick it off but I want like five minutes you telling your story but just
minutes you telling your story but just
minutes you telling your story but just hey is what I’m doing ah and I thought
hey is what I’m doing ah and I thought
hey is what I’m doing ah and I thought it’d be fun to do this review and show
it’d be fun to do this review and show
it’d be fun to do this review and show you guys how you can make your copy more
you guys how you can make your copy more
you guys how you can make your copy more fantasy related and have a great impact
fantasy related and have a great impact
fantasy related and have a great impact you know on your audience right
you know on your audience right
you know on your audience right something like that but you know put in
something like that but you know put in
something like that but you know put in your work yeah and then tell me why you
your work yeah and then tell me why you
your work yeah and then tell me why you chose this company okay right because
chose this company okay right because
chose this company okay right because this is we wanted to pick a company that
this is we wanted to pick a company that
this is we wanted to pick a company that you actually potentially wanted to work
you actually potentially wanted to work
you actually potentially wanted to work with like their products so say like
with like their products so say like
with like their products so say like here’s a great company that i bought
here’s a great company that i bought
here’s a great company that i bought from i love them they have a great home
from i love them they have a great home
from i love them they have a great home pick three products i buy from them you
pick three products i buy from them you
pick three products i buy from them you know however many times what do they
know however many times what do they
know however many times what do they sell again is it lounger right least a
sell again is it lounger right least a
sell again is it lounger right least a lingerie yes yeah like hold up something
lingerie yes yeah like hold up something
lingerie yes yeah like hold up something that you bought from them you know just
that you bought from them you know just
that you bought from them you know just love that that’s a great idea no
love that that’s a great idea no
love that that’s a great idea no copywriter is going to do this right
copywriter is going to do this right
copywriter is going to do this right this is what’s going to bring them is it
this is what’s going to bring them is it
this is what’s going to bring them is it cool and then you get into like uses you
cool and then you get into like uses you
cool and then you get into like uses you know it’s got a great company great
know it’s got a great company great
know it’s got a great company great product and then you go to their website
product and then you go to their website
product and then you go to their website and here’s the description even if you
and here’s the description even if you
and here’s the description even if you have like take the product that you’re
have like take the product that you’re
have like take the product that you’re holding up in your hand and show them
holding up in your hand and show them
holding up in your hand and show them yeah for that page that’s a good idea i
yeah for that page that’s a good idea i
yeah for that page that’s a good idea i love to have practices right and then
love to have practices right and then
love to have practices right and then you it may mean now rework you know all
you it may mean now rework you know all
you it may mean now rework you know all of your coffee that’s okay you’re right
of your coffee that’s okay you’re right
of your coffee that’s okay you’re right cuz i think different i pick different
cuz i think different i pick different
cuz i think different i pick different products but i love that idea cuz i
products but i love that idea cuz i
products but i love that idea cuz i could use I know the products that I you
could use I know the products that I you
could use I know the products that I you know that I don’t so yeah love that so
know that I don’t so yeah love that so
know that I don’t so yeah love that so right if you can incorporate that
right if you can incorporate that
right if you can incorporate that storytelling and drop people into you a
storytelling and drop people into you a
storytelling and drop people into you a little bit more than it makes it much
little bit more than it makes it much
little bit more than it makes it much more powerful than just the
more powerful than just the
more powerful than just the before-and-after video yeah okay yeah
before-and-after video yeah okay yeah
before-and-after video yeah okay yeah that’s cool and then and then so
that’s cool and then and then so
that’s cool and then and then so actually you’re done so I mean as you go
actually you’re done so I mean as you go
actually you’re done so I mean as you go through what I guess so you have that
through what I guess so you have that
through what I guess so you have that whole intro part then as you’re going to
whole intro part then as you’re going to
whole intro part then as you’re going to it you can explain just like what you
it you can explain just like what you
it you can explain just like what you said explain what’s wrong with the
said explain what’s wrong with the
said explain what’s wrong with the current copy
current copy
current copy thought process explain how you come up
thought process explain how you come up
thought process explain how you come up with new one that’s horrible technical
with new one that’s horrible technical
with new one that’s horrible technical stuff and then wrap it up at the end so
stuff and then wrap it up at the end so
stuff and then wrap it up at the end so like why this is all important what is
like why this is all important what is
like why this is all important what is like the key lesson that you’re taking
like the key lesson that you’re taking
like the key lesson that you’re taking from this if maybe they’re not writing
from this if maybe they’re not writing
from this if maybe they’re not writing enough or maybe they’re right into
enough or maybe they’re right into
enough or maybe they’re right into factual or whatever it is i sum it up
factual or whatever it is i sum it up
factual or whatever it is i sum it up for me but I have a take-home nugget
for me but I have a take-home nugget
for me but I have a take-home nugget that I can use what’s gonna end up
that I can use what’s gonna end up
that I can use what’s gonna end up happening is you gonna have people who
happening is you gonna have people who
happening is you gonna have people who will take your stuff and try to apply to
will take your stuff and try to apply to
will take your stuff and try to apply to their business themselves sure and
their business themselves sure and
their business themselves sure and that’s great like these are the people
that’s great like these are the people
that’s great like these are the people who may at some point aspire to higher
who may at some point aspire to higher
who may at some point aspire to higher up operator like you so you’re still
up operator like you so you’re still
up operator like you so you’re still helping like a mass of people yeah well
helping like a mass of people yeah well
helping like a mass of people yeah well you’re all saying that people watching
you’re all saying that people watching
you’re all saying that people watching who love what you’re saying and realize
who love what you’re saying and realize
who love what you’re saying and realize I can never do this myself and I’ve been
I can never do this myself and I’ve been
I can never do this myself and I’ve been trying to do it myself and every problem
trying to do it myself and every problem
trying to do it myself and every problem she talked about that’s me okay I need
she talked about that’s me okay I need
she talked about that’s me okay I need to hire her right so I having that kind
to hire her right so I having that kind
to hire her right so I having that kind of some up some people will value their
of some up some people will value their
of some up some people will value their time and enjoy expertise it bring people
time and enjoy expertise it bring people
time and enjoy expertise it bring people don’t you be the people become your
don’t you be the people become your
don’t you be the people become your clients and others will just use the
clients and others will just use the
clients and others will just use the information to make their business a
information to make their business a
information to make their business a little better so you’re helping arrange
little better so you’re helping arrange
little better so you’re helping arrange of people but also hopefully adventure
of people but also hopefully adventure
of people but also hopefully adventure daring some business for your company
daring some business for your company
daring some business for your company right no I love that idea cuz you’re
right no I love that idea cuz you’re
right no I love that idea cuz you’re right it helps other people who can’t
right it helps other people who can’t
right it helps other people who can’t hire a copywriter or maybe just don’t
hire a copywriter or maybe just don’t
hire a copywriter or maybe just don’t don’t need to like they just have like a
don’t need to like they just have like a
don’t need to like they just have like a small amount of things as they need to
small amount of things as they need to
small amount of things as they need to change on their own but then you’re
change on their own but then you’re
change on their own but then you’re right it shows other people who could
right it shows other people who could
right it shows other people who could hire me what I can do yeah and then if
hire me what I can do yeah and then if
hire me what I can do yeah and then if you had at the end um your logo your
you had at the end um your logo your
you had at the end um your logo your website just a easy way to for people to
website just a easy way to for people to
website just a easy way to for people to touch with you yeah and I can emphasize
touch with you yeah and I can emphasize
touch with you yeah and I can emphasize the fantasy a little more yeah that’s
the fantasy a little more yeah that’s
the fantasy a little more yeah that’s like fantasy yeah yeah that’s gonna be
like fantasy yeah yeah that’s gonna be
like fantasy yeah yeah that’s gonna be part of the whole video it’s gonna be
part of the whole video it’s gonna be
part of the whole video it’s gonna be part of your intro hi how you chose the
part of your intro hi how you chose the
part of your intro hi how you chose the company it’s a lingerie company right
company it’s a lingerie company right
company it’s a lingerie company right like that ties into fantasy yes how you
like that ties into fantasy yes how you
like that ties into fantasy yes how you work on the copy all of that little
work on the copy all of that little
work on the copy all of that little friends you’ll be I mean you can’t help
friends you’ll be I mean you can’t help
friends you’ll be I mean you can’t help but include tracks the Train one so it’s
but include tracks the Train one so it’s
but include tracks the Train one so it’s gonna lose out of everything that you
gonna lose out of everything that you
gonna lose out of everything that you could
could
could cool I love it thank you it’s good i’m
cool I love it thank you it’s good i’m
cool I love it thank you it’s good i’m excited for that um and then we’ll see
excited for that um and then we’ll see
excited for that um and then we’ll see what happens with that first video yeah
what happens with that first video yeah
what happens with that first video yeah I’m hesitant to give you more
I’m hesitant to give you more
I’m hesitant to give you more assignments totally we got to kind of
assignments totally we got to kind of
assignments totally we got to kind of Hammer these these ones out yeah i know
Hammer these these ones out yeah i know
Hammer these these ones out yeah i know i gotta finish I gotta finish but I am
i gotta finish I gotta finish but I am
i gotta finish I gotta finish but I am making good progress yeah and keep doing
making good progress yeah and keep doing
making good progress yeah and keep doing keep doing the social media stuff the
keep doing the social media stuff the
keep doing the social media stuff the twitter stuff i think uh you will
twitter stuff i think uh you will
twitter stuff i think uh you will totally develop a rhythm that works for
totally develop a rhythm that works for
totally develop a rhythm that works for you mm-hmm as we see people responding
you mm-hmm as we see people responding
you mm-hmm as we see people responding to you as you see kind of what feels
to you as you see kind of what feels
to you as you see kind of what feels right so it’s okay to experiment with
right so it’s okay to experiment with
right so it’s okay to experiment with something you know take your risk with
something you know take your risk with
something you know take your risk with something um you can share some cocoa
something um you can share some cocoa
something um you can share some cocoa puffs on with you you know relates
puffs on with you you know relates
puffs on with you you know relates somehow um but i’ll definitely start to
somehow um but i’ll definitely start to
somehow um but i’ll definitely start to you don’t ramp that up a little bit at
you don’t ramp that up a little bit at
you don’t ramp that up a little bit at least keep what you’re doing and if you
least keep what you’re doing and if you
least keep what you’re doing and if you can get it to you know maybe 11 coal per
can get it to you know maybe 11 coal per
can get it to you know maybe 11 coal per week and one Jen thought per week yeah I
week and one Jen thought per week yeah I
week and one Jen thought per week yeah I could do that yeah let’s get even more
could do that yeah let’s get even more
could do that yeah let’s get even more than that making notes it I’m making
than that making notes it I’m making
than that making notes it I’m making notes I’m gonna drive it and next time
notes I’m gonna drive it and next time
notes I’m gonna drive it and next time we talk again come on stop it going
we talk again come on stop it going
we talk again come on stop it going let’s get it’s good this is good don’t I
let’s get it’s good this is good don’t I
let’s get it’s good this is good don’t I i I’d great to see you embrace the
i I’d great to see you embrace the
i I’d great to see you embrace the concept and feel comfortable in it and
concept and feel comfortable in it and
concept and feel comfortable in it and and I’m excited to see where things go
and I’m excited to see where things go
and I’m excited to see where things go retail you too i love it i know i have
retail you too i love it i know i have
retail you too i love it i know i have to admit when I first talked to you last
to admit when I first talked to you last
to admit when I first talked to you last time I was still a little tentative
time I was still a little tentative
time I was still a little tentative about the word and now I’m like totally
about the word and now I’m like totally
about the word and now I’m like totally excited dunno you know what it’s
excited dunno you know what it’s
excited dunno you know what it’s different and it takes time to sink in I
different and it takes time to sink in I
different and it takes time to sink in I kind of went through the same thing with
kind of went through the same thing with
kind of went through the same thing with believe when I when I first took it on I
believe when I when I first took it on I
believe when I when I first took it on I only said it to myself all right yeah
only said it to myself all right yeah
only said it to myself all right yeah this feels right this feels right and it
this feels right this feels right and it
this feels right this feels right and it became everything yeah good okay any
became everything yeah good okay any
became everything yeah good okay any other thoughts or questions from the
other thoughts or questions from the
other thoughts or questions from the pasta cup
pasta cup
pasta cup week’s do you want to talk about I don’t
week’s do you want to talk about I don’t
week’s do you want to talk about I don’t think so i think i was really really
think so i think i was really really
think so i think i was really really looking for some direction on the video
looking for some direction on the video
looking for some direction on the video so i really appreciate that that’s great
so i really appreciate that that’s great
so i really appreciate that that’s great okay okay well hopefully we can watch
okay okay well hopefully we can watch
okay okay well hopefully we can watch the video on-screen chair I know what
the video on-screen chair I know what
the video on-screen chair I know what watching can see two I’m done yeah you
watching can see two I’m done yeah you
watching can see two I’m done yeah you know I will aim to send it to you in
know I will aim to send it to you in
know I will aim to send it to you in advance so you can look at it first and
advance so you can look at it first and
advance so you can look at it first and then you can screech everybody does look
then you can screech everybody does look
then you can screech everybody does look at at first I don’t know maybe I should
at at first I don’t know maybe I should
at at first I don’t know maybe I should watch it with everybody okay okay let’s
watch it with everybody okay okay let’s
watch it with everybody okay okay let’s do this I’m ceiling on the spot I do too
do this I’m ceiling on the spot I do too
do this I’m ceiling on the spot I do too actually it’s nice to see your reaction
actually it’s nice to see your reaction
actually it’s nice to see your reaction so yeah I like the idea okay cool oh you
so yeah I like the idea okay cool oh you
so yeah I like the idea okay cool oh you know two weeks here we go videos go
know two weeks here we go videos go
know two weeks here we go videos go together okay it’s our my main
together okay it’s our my main
together okay it’s our my main assignment for the week up for the next
assignment for the week up for the next
assignment for the week up for the next two weeks so I think I can do it alright
two weeks so I think I can do it alright
two weeks so I think I can do it alright thanks Jen good luck Inc you ever get to
thanks Jen good luck Inc you ever get to
thanks Jen good luck Inc you ever get to see you are too soon all right
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