I’m Evan Carmichael welcome to the edition of ask Evan today and we I’m
edition of ask Evan today and we I’m
edition of ask Evan today and we I’m going to be doing a another one of my
going to be doing a another one of my
going to be doing a another one of my fiverr gig so I’m reviewing a website
fiverr gig so I’m reviewing a website
fiverr gig so I’m reviewing a website given my feedback so this one comes in
given my feedback so this one comes in
given my feedback so this one comes in from website grandma’s old book so
from website grandma’s old book so
from website grandma’s old book so let’s read this up and see what we can
let’s read this up and see what we can
let’s read this up and see what we can find out about it so interesting so I
find out about it so interesting so I
find out about it so interesting so I like I like to play on words okok book
like I like to play on words okok book
like I like to play on words okok book instead of cookbook i like that i like
instead of cookbook i like that i like
instead of cookbook i like that i like the website design in general looks fun
the website design in general looks fun
the website design in general looks fun looks professional you can see it’s
looks professional you can see it’s
looks professional you can see it’s about your grandmother like the
about your grandmother like the
about your grandmother like the background like be able to see you and
background like be able to see you and
background like be able to see you and presuming this is a this is you lay
presuming this is a this is you lay
presuming this is a this is you lay overall looks very nice hairy
overall looks very nice hairy
overall looks very nice hairy professional so a good job from the
professional so a good job from the
professional so a good job from the start here i looked at the homepage to
start here i looked at the homepage to
start here i looked at the homepage to see a little bit more about the book so
see a little bit more about the book so
see a little bit more about the book so she had a novel way of the scar my
she had a novel way of the scar my
she had a novel way of the scar my chicken dinner made for nervous doctor
chicken dinner made for nervous doctor
chicken dinner made for nervous doctor and read faces she feeling situation was
and read faces she feeling situation was
and read faces she feeling situation was chicken and she was completely
chicken and she was completely
chicken and she was completely innocent of the slang but the family’s
innocent of the slang but the family’s
innocent of the slang but the family’s never quite ready for the bomb okay
never quite ready for the bomb okay
never quite ready for the bomb okay so interesting I again I like this I
so interesting I again I like this I
so interesting I again I like this I like the story like to play on words
like the story like to play on words
like the story like to play on words like the picture of the book I’m not
like the picture of the book I’m not
like the picture of the book I’m not quite sure if this book is a recipe book
quite sure if this book is a recipe book
quite sure if this book is a recipe book is it a cookbook or is it a novel you
is it a cookbook or is it a novel you
is it a cookbook or is it a novel you might want to make that just a little
might want to make that just a little
might want to make that just a little bit more clear for people who are coming
bit more clear for people who are coming
bit more clear for people who are coming to the website and they’re thinking
to the website and they’re thinking
to the website and they’re thinking about buying this book I’d also try to
about buying this book I’d also try to
about buying this book I’d also try to add a little more content so if you’re
add a little more content so if you’re
add a little more content so if you’re writing session your home page you’re
writing session your home page you’re
writing session your home page you’re trying to write for different different
trying to write for different different
trying to write for different different keywords it helps to have it on here on
keywords it helps to have it on here on
keywords it helps to have it on here on the home page and longer to give you
the home page and longer to give you
the home page and longer to give you just give yourself chance of ranking
just give yourself chance of ranking
just give yourself chance of ranking better looking at your title tags here
better looking at your title tags here
better looking at your title tags here it says chicken recipes grandma and
it says chicken recipes grandma and
it says chicken recipes grandma and grandma so you don’t need grandma in
grandma so you don’t need grandma in
grandma so you don’t need grandma in there twice but it sounds like it is a
there twice but it sounds like it is a
there twice but it sounds like it is a book of chicken recipes so I try to put
book of chicken recipes so I try to put
book of chicken recipes so I try to put that in here somewhere that it is a
that in here somewhere that it is a
that in here somewhere that it is a chicken recipe cookbook maybe show a few
chicken recipe cookbook maybe show a few
chicken recipe cookbook maybe show a few screenshots of it just generally add
screenshots of it just generally add
screenshots of it just generally add more text to this page as well let’s go
more text to this page as well let’s go
more text to this page as well let’s go and see what else we’ve got here so
and see what else we’ve got here so
and see what else we’ve got here so let’s look about you about Steve so
let’s look about you about Steve so
let’s look about you about Steve so again very short first thought you want
again very short first thought you want
again very short first thought you want to add more text and show a little more
to add more text and show a little more
to add more text and show a little more about who you are I put a picture it
about who you are I put a picture it
about who you are I put a picture it looks like you have one in that video
looks like you have one in that video
looks like you have one in that video you have from the home page
you have from the home page
you have from the home page put more about you in here put it put a
put more about you in here put it put a
put more about you in here put it put a nice smiling picture of you so people
nice smiling picture of you so people
nice smiling picture of you so people can learn a little bit more about who
can learn a little bit more about who
can learn a little bit more about who you are so you work works with all
you are so you work works with all
you are so you work works with all things creative you right adult and
things creative you right adult and
things creative you right adult and children’s books will create marketing
children’s books will create marketing
children’s books will create marketing plans were provided clients so you’ve
plans were provided clients so you’ve
plans were provided clients so you’ve written other books if I put that in
written other books if I put that in
written other books if I put that in here to you know put put links to the
here to you know put put links to the
here to you know put put links to the adult from children books that you’ve
adult from children books that you’ve
adult from children books that you’ve written you know show a little more
written you know show a little more
written you know show a little more about your history why you wanted to
about your history why you wanted to
about your history why you wanted to write this book if you’re talking about
write this book if you’re talking about
write this book if you’re talking about your you know you love being a friendly
your you know you love being a friendly
your you know you love being a friendly to your father to your son’s put a
to your father to your son’s put a
to your father to your son’s put a picture of them in here the more person
picture of them in here the more person
picture of them in here the more person you make it the more of a connection you
you make it the more of a connection you
you make it the more of a connection you make with people who come to this
make with people who come to this
make with people who come to this website and the longer they spend in the
website and the longer they spend in the
website and the longer they spend in the better they feel they know you like you
better they feel they know you like you
better they feel they know you like you trust you they’re more likely to take
trust you they’re more likely to take
trust you they’re more likely to take the next step and buy the book so I
the next step and buy the book so I
the next step and buy the book so I definitely fill out that section a
definitely fill out that section a
definitely fill out that section a little bit more what’s what else let’s
little bit more what’s what else let’s
little bit more what’s what else let’s see about the book so there’s a link on
see about the book so there’s a link on
see about the book so there’s a link on this side on the side about the book
this side on the side about the book
this side on the side about the book let’s load that up the call came late
let’s load that up the call came late
let’s load that up the call came late Saturday afternoon it was mom so it
Saturday afternoon it was mom so it
Saturday afternoon it was mom so it looks like you’re telling a story here
looks like you’re telling a story here
looks like you’re telling a story here scroll down so it’s a good food good
scroll down so it’s a good food good
scroll down so it’s a good food good laws can’t go wrong it looks like it’s a
laws can’t go wrong it looks like it’s a
laws can’t go wrong it looks like it’s a story about your grandmother which is
story about your grandmother which is
story about your grandmother which is great again I’m still not sure reading
great again I’m still not sure reading
great again I’m still not sure reading this if this is a novel or cookbook from
this if this is a novel or cookbook from
this if this is a novel or cookbook from the home page title tag we saw that
the home page title tag we saw that
the home page title tag we saw that you’re you’re trying to rank for chicken
you’re you’re trying to rank for chicken
you’re you’re trying to rank for chicken recipes so I’m assuming it’s a cookbook
recipes so I’m assuming it’s a cookbook
recipes so I’m assuming it’s a cookbook but from this it looks like it’s a story
but from this it looks like it’s a story
but from this it looks like it’s a story and not a cookbook so so that confusion
and not a cookbook so so that confusion
and not a cookbook so so that confusion may cause people not to buy because
may cause people not to buy because
may cause people not to buy because they’re not quite sure what they’re
they’re not quite sure what they’re
they’re not quite sure what they’re getting if it is a book of recipes you
getting if it is a book of recipes you
getting if it is a book of recipes you may want to say you know included our 45
may want to say you know included our 45
may want to say you know included our 45 fantastic chicken recipes from your
fantastic chicken recipes from your
fantastic chicken recipes from your grandma or whatever it is or has some
grandma or whatever it is or has some
grandma or whatever it is or has some screenshots of it or if it’s a novel
screenshots of it or if it’s a novel
screenshots of it or if it’s a novel clearly say it’s a novel you’re telling
clearly say it’s a novel you’re telling
clearly say it’s a novel you’re telling a great story about your grandmother so
a great story about your grandmother so
a great story about your grandmother so but just make that a little bit more
but just make that a little bit more
but just make that a little bit more clear but it’s great do you have more
clear but it’s great do you have more
clear but it’s great do you have more content on this page you should try to
content on this page you should try to
content on this page you should try to aim for that on all the pages as well
aim for that on all the pages as well
aim for that on all the pages as well not a lot of pages here so let’s see the
not a lot of pages here so let’s see the
not a lot of pages here so let’s see the the testimonials one what are the same
the testimonials one what are the same
the testimonials one what are the same we’d love to hear from you so there’s no
we’d love to hear from you so there’s no
we’d love to hear from you so there’s no no testimonials yet that doesn’t look
no testimonials yet that doesn’t look
no testimonials yet that doesn’t look great especially the book has been
great especially the book has been
great especially the book has been really released I would try to fill that
really released I would try to fill that
really released I would try to fill that up boot if you get your friends and
up boot if you get your friends and
up boot if you get your friends and family to leave some testimonies at the
family to leave some testimonies at the
family to leave some testimonies at the beginning try to find if you have any
beginning try to find if you have any
beginning try to find if you have any author friends who you know people may
author friends who you know people may
author friends who you know people may recognize or some people were in the
recognize or some people were in the
recognize or some people were in the cookbook who may be able to put
cookbook who may be able to put
cookbook who may be able to put something on here until you get
something on here until you get
something on here until you get something i’d probably take this page
something i’d probably take this page
something i’d probably take this page down because it doesn’t look good to
down because it doesn’t look good to
down because it doesn’t look good to come the testimonials page and see
come the testimonials page and see
come the testimonials page and see nothing but i’d still just try to get a
nothing but i’d still just try to get a
nothing but i’d still just try to get a few testimonials and put them in and and
few testimonials and put them in and and
few testimonials and put them in and and once you do get some testimonies i put
once you do get some testimonies i put
once you do get some testimonies i put them on the homepage as well so when i’m
them on the homepage as well so when i’m
them on the homepage as well so when i’m visiting this home page it’s great you
visiting this home page it’s great you
visiting this home page it’s great you have the video you’ve got your quick
have the video you’ve got your quick
have the video you’ve got your quick intro you want to fill this up a little
intro you want to fill this up a little
intro you want to fill this up a little bit more but if somebody wrote you know
bit more but if somebody wrote you know
bit more but if somebody wrote you know best book I’ve ever read or best best
best book I’ve ever read or best best
best book I’ve ever read or best best chicken recipes I’ve ever seen then that
chicken recipes I’ve ever seen then that
chicken recipes I’ve ever seen then that will add a little more credibility to it
will add a little more credibility to it
will add a little more credibility to it as well but overall I think the the page
as well but overall I think the the page
as well but overall I think the the page is a the awesome start the layout is
is a the awesome start the layout is
is a the awesome start the layout is really nice it looks professional it’s
really nice it looks professional it’s
really nice it looks professional it’s kind of funky and quirky fits I think
kind of funky and quirky fits I think
kind of funky and quirky fits I think the theme of your book I just do a
the theme of your book I just do a
the theme of your book I just do a little bit better job of the content
little bit better job of the content
little bit better job of the content adding more in and explaining a little
adding more in and explaining a little
adding more in and explaining a little bit more about what it is that you get
bit more about what it is that you get
bit more about what it is that you get with the book kind of think you’re well
with the book kind of think you’re well
with the book kind of think you’re well on your way so congratulations so for
on your way so congratulations so for
on your way so congratulations so for those of you watching if you liked the
those of you watching if you liked the
those of you watching if you liked the video please give it a thumbs up and if
video please give it a thumbs up and if
video please give it a thumbs up and if you have a comment about this website or
you have a comment about this website or
you have a comment about this website or you have a question for your own
you have a question for your own
you have a question for your own business feel free to leave in the
business feel free to leave in the
business feel free to leave in the comments section below I always read
comments section below I always read
comments section below I always read those and love seeing them come in so
those and love seeing them come in so
those and love seeing them come in so thank you and I’ll see you on the next
thank you and I’ll see you on the next
thank you and I’ll see you on the next episode
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