architecture and had the privilege of being
student of Suassuna Aryan and all
class interval I was bothering
The Adrian teacher to talk about
the works of it until one day he a
A little without patience gave it to me and
said so you are a fish out of water
Then I realized that Adrian wanted to say
that I did not see myself as an architect
I looked for a course that would kill that
I thirst and made letters and the first
The day I gave a class I discovered that
it was a fish inside an ocean
I felt welcomed I belonged to that
And then I saw how words have
power
I’m a passionate about the language
Portuguese and I’m in love with
words I think everyone has to
treat them very well so I like
talk about proper communication and then I
I wonder what would be a
many would say
is correct communication and is true
even because I’m sure many
read something today write some
thing today and if the text was 99%
The one who shouted was the one who
1% incorrect and we have an excuse
Portuguese is one of the most
the world is true but she
she’s very generous too
only words have Aryan power
suassuna taught me this and we
we must take good care of those words and
yes a good communication it has to be
correct we have to use the
generosity of language in our favor
so if that day you ‘re tired
You for some reason do not know if
The obstacle is with it iel ii
You’re not going to risk it simply.
replace with a synonym put
obstacle problem over correction one
The most frequent doubts are the use of
comma and punctuation mark people do not
There is nothing innocent. He can change the
sense of a sentence
I have a tip always very good to
give everyone listen to me
even because it is very common we are
doubt and sometimes we do not have the time
take the doubt and we need
click send to that text
follow when writing your text
have doubts if you have that comma
if that one up to that crazy if that
Sorry, this word is not possible.
rewrite in a way that the doubt is
overcome
my tip is do not put do not put the
comma does not put the accent serious in the air
do not put the accent on who gets your
text will think yes she was
she may be in a hurry today.
very stressful because she forgot to
crase she forgot the comma she
forgot the cent
but this was the opposite and if you
puts cras and puts it alive and puts the
accent mistakenly nobody will say
which is why you were rushed or
stressed
They will tell you that you do not speak the language.
but also exaggerates with this
tip did not see that I gave this tip to
my nephew who prepared with me for
I only stayed six weeks
blacksmith’s house, and then
I took the rodrigo from the building I paid
a snack took him to the course stayed
six weeks improved a little text
But then my sister was called in high school.
the coordination said come talk
when they came to my sister and
rodrigo had an essay in the
coordinator and she said so see
Rodrigo even improved a little bit more
he was able to write a text of 27
lines with no commas
he said so thank god he did not
said my name my people they my
dinda said that in doubt I do not
put look see
No one can be so doubtful but it is a
very good tip
something other than communication beyond
correct, it must be objective and
people talk a lot we write a lot
to say little and one of the most
common communication problems that
objectivity are espionage
the redundancies I’m sure
many here today have passed and mails and I
I think some even use the expression
follows attached
think a little about this if you are
attached heat
follows attachment is twin brother of hemorrhage
of blood
the next time you write
e-mail and place follows attached to spreadsheet
write only the next worksheet and
gain more objectivity leave your text
more repressive expressions such as
either this is or rather we use these
explanatory expressions to say what
we already said otherwise
one or you were not clear on the
first time you are underestimating the
ability to who gets your text
understood at first reading in the
better write get more
objectivity
now see the pleonasmos that are figures
fabulous language fernando person
wrote the salty sea how much of thy salt
are tears of portugal
my youngest students when I listen
this poem says so teacher and if the
Fernando Pessoa
I say is is since you like and I say
yes he does not know that the most salty and me
I explain when someone wrote this.
Portuguese poem was going through a war and
Portuguese mothers wept so much and
There were so many tears that she could fill
a sea and I explain to them that
pleonasmo intent of emphasis on
emotion
but in our professional text and is not
welcome
then the proper communication she needs
be correct and objective
but it has to be mainly clear
and clarity is one of the best
characteristics of a communication
proper
It’s just that we stopped being simple.
because we started to confuse and
erudition with intelligence search
It seems like someone writes and speaks well.
someone calls someone to your room
asking for a colleague who has just
leave that colleague you answer says so
Philippe not five
against you just called Felipe de
crazy felipe is out there looking for
he is not there when the
people just stopped saying
Philip is not in communication
appropriate it has to be correct
objective and clear and we will be the
best communicators in the world
if we respect three elements the
interlocutor the subject and the environment is
change one of these three elements people to
People have to change the way they talk.
You do not talk at home with your son.
Do you talk to a colleague in the
job
you do not use the same language for a
she leaves the note for her husband to
prepare your resume that will
dispute a position because it is not appropriate
It’s clothes you do not wear on the beach.
use in the church
You do not use the ballad that you use in
because it is not appropriate
we need to take better care of the language
Portuguese because it’s our identity
we need to know how to treat words
because they have power
I very much believe in words of
empowerment I think women do not
they are bridges and I think
speak the feminine characteristic that
Women do not need to shout to
cimpor
in general they do not say a bad word for
criticize even in a language that is
essentially male because
male
to ask about this
presentation maybe someone tell them
They really liked having more women
gifts than men but we are
much bigger than that
we get to laugh at expressions like
Good night to everyone
It’s not true and then we’re thinking.
that we are protagonists of these new
times
no woman can pass the pen to
the other write her story who
write our story, it’s us and me
I wish that in the book of your life alone
success words are entered
thanks
[Applause]
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