hey it’s Evan I’m doing another one of my Fiverr gigs where I’m reviewing
my Fiverr gigs where I’m reviewing
my Fiverr gigs where I’m reviewing somebody’s website and today it’s
somebody’s website and today it’s
somebody’s website and today it’s somebody that I know it’s from dr. Anna
somebody that I know it’s from dr. Anna
somebody that I know it’s from dr. Anna Baranowski was one of the members of my
Baranowski was one of the members of my
Baranowski was one of the members of my mastermind coaching program so she
mastermind coaching program so she
mastermind coaching program so she ordered the gig here on fiber and wanted
ordered the gig here on fiber and wanted
ordered the gig here on fiber and wanted me to review her site so and I will see
me to review her site so and I will see
me to review her site so and I will see I’ll see what’s going on with your site
I’ll see what’s going on with your site
I’ll see what’s going on with your site and give you some feedback so at the
and give you some feedback so at the
and give you some feedback so at the website you want me to look at is
website you want me to look at is
website you want me to look at is tickler calm so we’ll take a quick look
tickler calm so we’ll take a quick look
tickler calm so we’ll take a quick look pop it up here now I know a little bit
pop it up here now I know a little bit
pop it up here now I know a little bit about Anna’s business from the year
about Anna’s business from the year
about Anna’s business from the year she’s been in my program but I’m going
she’s been in my program but I’m going
she’s been in my program but I’m going to pretend like I have no idea what’s
to pretend like I have no idea what’s
to pretend like I have no idea what’s going on here so right away I look at
going on here so right away I look at
going on here so right away I look at the homepage and I noticed a message in
the homepage and I noticed a message in
the homepage and I noticed a message in here so online training for trauma
here so online training for trauma
here so online training for trauma professionals so that’s great and that
professionals so that’s great and that
professionals so that’s great and that it explains what you do but it’s not
it explains what you do but it’s not
it explains what you do but it’s not really impactful but it doesn’t hit me
really impactful but it doesn’t hit me
really impactful but it doesn’t hit me there’s not even a benefit here there’s
there’s not even a benefit here there’s
there’s not even a benefit here there’s no feeling that I get from reading that
no feeling that I get from reading that
no feeling that I get from reading that statement so it’s better than a lot of
statement so it’s better than a lot of
statement so it’s better than a lot of websites they don’t even explain what
websites they don’t even explain what
websites they don’t even explain what they do but this could be a lot stronger
they do but this could be a lot stronger
they do but this could be a lot stronger in making a connection with me as a
in making a connection with me as a
in making a connection with me as a reader to say yes I believe in this and
reader to say yes I believe in this and
reader to say yes I believe in this and I need to learn more about it I’m never
I need to learn more about it I’m never
I need to learn more about it I’m never a huge fan of stock photography so here
a huge fan of stock photography so here
a huge fan of stock photography so here at the top we’ve got this leave a
at the top we’ve got this leave a
at the top we’ve got this leave a message thing that’s not what Anna looks
message thing that’s not what Anna looks
message thing that’s not what Anna looks like you know this is the seminar it’s
like you know this is the seminar it’s
like you know this is the seminar it’s not her seminar I always like you know
not her seminar I always like you know
not her seminar I always like you know if you’re going to use pictures it’s
if you’re going to use pictures it’s
if you’re going to use pictures it’s great and they don’t always have to be
great and they don’t always have to be
great and they don’t always have to be your pictures but not the stock
your pictures but not the stock
your pictures but not the stock photography where people know that you
photography where people know that you
photography where people know that you know they’re just models being used here
know they’re just models being used here
know they’re just models being used here so I try to upgrade the quality of your
so I try to upgrade the quality of your
so I try to upgrade the quality of your pictures a little bit it looks cluttered
pictures a little bit it looks cluttered
pictures a little bit it looks cluttered so I’m not sure what you want me to do
so I’m not sure what you want me to do
so I’m not sure what you want me to do next ok so this follow us here signup
next ok so this follow us here signup
next ok so this follow us here signup login there’s a huge top nav with tons
login there’s a huge top nav with tons
login there’s a huge top nav with tons of pull downs there’s three boxes here
of pull downs there’s three boxes here
of pull downs there’s three boxes here with different links there’s a video
with different links there’s a video
with different links there’s a video newsletter tons of stuff so this should
newsletter tons of stuff so this should
newsletter tons of stuff so this should be clearer like what do you want me to
be clearer like what do you want me to
be clearer like what do you want me to do next to come to the site i’m a little
do next to come to the site i’m a little
do next to come to the site i’m a little a little overwhelmed i like that you you
a little overwhelmed i like that you you
a little overwhelmed i like that you you have this logo this leaf you’re using it
have this logo this leaf you’re using it
have this logo this leaf you’re using it in your pictures which is great instead
in your pictures which is great instead
in your pictures which is great instead of bullets i love the use of the logo so
of bullets i love the use of the logo so
of bullets i love the use of the logo so that’s that’s awesome keeping the brain
that’s that’s awesome keeping the brain
that’s that’s awesome keeping the brain consistency there but again I kind of
consistency there but again I kind of
consistency there but again I kind of shorten this down you don’t have
shorten this down you don’t have
shorten this down you don’t have actually had that much
actually had that much
actually had that much saan here this is your only messaging
saan here this is your only messaging
saan here this is your only messaging but there’s tons of call to actions and
but there’s tons of call to actions and
but there’s tons of call to actions and i’m not sure what to do when i come on
i’m not sure what to do when i come on
i’m not sure what to do when i come on the site it’s a little confusing looking
the site it’s a little confusing looking
the site it’s a little confusing looking down here you write this message I guess
down here you write this message I guess
down here you write this message I guess is under your newsletter helping you
is under your newsletter helping you
is under your newsletter helping you help trauma survivors today this is a
help trauma survivors today this is a
help trauma survivors today this is a little more powerful so this is better
little more powerful so this is better
little more powerful so this is better than online training for trauma
than online training for trauma
than online training for trauma professionals helping you help trauma
professionals helping you help trauma
professionals helping you help trauma survivors it’s still not great but it’s
survivors it’s still not great but it’s
survivors it’s still not great but it’s way better speaks more to the benefits I
way better speaks more to the benefits I
way better speaks more to the benefits I still not getting a feeling from it but
still not getting a feeling from it but
still not getting a feeling from it but it’s more the benefits of what you do
it’s more the benefits of what you do
it’s more the benefits of what you do instead of just what it is that you do
instead of just what it is that you do
instead of just what it is that you do with the training so that’s a little bit
with the training so that’s a little bit
with the training so that’s a little bit better this shouldn’t be buried this
better this shouldn’t be buried this
better this shouldn’t be buried this should be you know more prominent and I
should be you know more prominent and I
should be you know more prominent and I definitely work on the messaging a
definitely work on the messaging a
definitely work on the messaging a little bit more and then scrolling down
little bit more and then scrolling down
little bit more and then scrolling down and notice you have here it’s designed
and notice you have here it’s designed
and notice you have here it’s designed by this company they probably threw that
by this company they probably threw that
by this company they probably threw that in there unless they they paid for that
in there unless they they paid for that
in there unless they they paid for that you might want to look at that because
you might want to look at that because
you might want to look at that because that’s your only external link and it’s
that’s your only external link and it’s
that’s your only external link and it’s going to your website designer so I you
going to your website designer so I you
going to your website designer so I you know they’d probably fit on there
know they’d probably fit on there
know they’d probably fit on there without you knowing so you probably want
without you knowing so you probably want
without you knowing so you probably want to talk about that and see if you’re
to talk about that and see if you’re
to talk about that and see if you’re getting if you got some kind of discount
getting if you got some kind of discount
getting if you got some kind of discount for that than fine but otherwise that
for that than fine but otherwise that
for that than fine but otherwise that look at taking that off so let’s look at
look at taking that off so let’s look at
look at taking that off so let’s look at a inside page and see what we can find
a inside page and see what we can find
a inside page and see what we can find let’s look at about us and see what pops
let’s look at about us and see what pops
let’s look at about us and see what pops up so about us this is great so a lot of
up so about us this is great so a lot of
up so about us this is great so a lot of information I love that you have this
information I love that you have this
information I love that you have this part here what our students are saying
part here what our students are saying
part here what our students are saying and you’ve got a quote on here
and you’ve got a quote on here
and you’ve got a quote on here testimonial somebody that has used it
testimonial somebody that has used it
testimonial somebody that has used it social proof is amazing this should be
social proof is amazing this should be
social proof is amazing this should be on the homepage maybe this on the
on the homepage maybe this on the
on the homepage maybe this on the homepage let’s take a quick look back so
homepage let’s take a quick look back so
homepage let’s take a quick look back so you’ve got this what our students are
you’ve got this what our students are
you’ve got this what our students are saying and then some stock picture I
saying and then some stock picture I
saying and then some stock picture I miss this right the home page is so
miss this right the home page is so
miss this right the home page is so cluttered I miss one of the most
cluttered I miss one of the most
cluttered I miss one of the most important things which is the
important things which is the
important things which is the testimonials from people are actually
testimonials from people are actually
testimonials from people are actually using what you’re doing and finding
using what you’re doing and finding
using what you’re doing and finding value in it so again you know your your
value in it so again you know your your
value in it so again you know your your there’s so many calls auctioneer that
there’s so many calls auctioneer that
there’s so many calls auctioneer that I’m getting confused and probably not
I’m getting confused and probably not
I’m getting confused and probably not taking the right step let’s go back to
taking the right step let’s go back to
taking the right step let’s go back to our story so this is great you know some
our story so this is great you know some
our story so this is great you know some information on here scroll down so
information on here scroll down so
information on here scroll down so here’s Anna here’s a picture looks
here’s Anna here’s a picture looks
here’s Anna here’s a picture looks authoritative I know that’s the history
authoritative I know that’s the history
authoritative I know that’s the history channel whatever you’ve got going on
channel whatever you’ve got going on
channel whatever you’ve got going on here so that’s great I might want to put
here so that’s great I might want to put
here so that’s great I might want to put another bio picture of you smiling so
another bio picture of you smiling so
another bio picture of you smiling so this is great to show the the you know
this is great to show the the you know
this is great to show the the you know social proof hey I’ve been on T
social proof hey I’ve been on T
social proof hey I’ve been on T yeoman recognized expert I’d also love
yeoman recognized expert I’d also love
yeoman recognized expert I’d also love to see you smiling right I know you have
to see you smiling right I know you have
to see you smiling right I know you have a great smile I see it on a regular
a great smile I see it on a regular
a great smile I see it on a regular basis so I’d love to see that come
basis so I’d love to see that come
basis so I’d love to see that come across so you know the friendly side of
across so you know the friendly side of
across so you know the friendly side of you as well in here reading this so okay
you as well in here reading this so okay
you as well in here reading this so okay you know you’re the CEO you know your
you know you’re the CEO you know your
you know you’re the CEO you know your background your guiding principle this
background your guiding principle this
background your guiding principle this this section is weak okay what I’d love
this section is weak okay what I’d love
this section is weak okay what I’d love to see here is why did you start this
to see here is why did you start this
to see here is why did you start this business and write it in the first
business and write it in the first
business and write it in the first person instead of dr. baranowski
person instead of dr. baranowski
person instead of dr. baranowski received her doctorate in clinical
received her doctorate in clinical
received her doctorate in clinical psychology say I started this business
psychology say I started this business
psychology say I started this business because I believe in X like what’s
because I believe in X like what’s
because I believe in X like what’s missing in the market what do you feel
missing in the market what do you feel
missing in the market what do you feel and why did you really start this thing
and why did you really start this thing
and why did you really start this thing have a little bit of passion in here
have a little bit of passion in here
have a little bit of passion in here that’s what is going to come across
that’s what is going to come across
that’s what is going to come across you’ve already done a lot of the heavy
you’ve already done a lot of the heavy
you’ve already done a lot of the heavy lifting where you have a story you have
lifting where you have a story you have
lifting where you have a story you have a picture a lot of entrepreneurs don’t
a picture a lot of entrepreneurs don’t
a picture a lot of entrepreneurs don’t even do this step is just a traditional
even do this step is just a traditional
even do this step is just a traditional corporate boring about us page have a
corporate boring about us page have a
corporate boring about us page have a smiling picture and tell me what some
smiling picture and tell me what some
smiling picture and tell me what some passion why you started this business
passion why you started this business
passion why you started this business what you’re hoping to accomplish you’ve
what you’re hoping to accomplish you’ve
what you’re hoping to accomplish you’ve impacted a ton of people and that
impacted a ton of people and that
impacted a ton of people and that doesn’t come across here on this side
doesn’t come across here on this side
doesn’t come across here on this side it’s very it’s very boring so i
it’s very it’s very boring so i
it’s very it’s very boring so i definitely look at switching up that
definitely look at switching up that
definitely look at switching up that messaging you can also get the SEO so in
messaging you can also get the SEO so in
messaging you can also get the SEO so in your title tag here you have
your title tag here you have
your title tag here you have traumatology institute at the top again
traumatology institute at the top again
traumatology institute at the top again so you don’t need that at the top of all
so you don’t need that at the top of all
so you don’t need that at the top of all your pages i probably take it off
your pages i probably take it off
your pages i probably take it off completely because you’re probably going
completely because you’re probably going
completely because you’re probably going to rank for that anyway so put in
to rank for that anyway so put in
to rank for that anyway so put in keywords that are more relevant to the
keywords that are more relevant to the
keywords that are more relevant to the specific page and move it all the way
specific page and move it all the way
specific page and move it all the way over to the left let’s look I have a
over to the left let’s look I have a
over to the left let’s look I have a page let’s go free information so we’ve
page let’s go free information so we’ve
page let’s go free information so we’ve got here giving stuff away free a little
got here giving stuff away free a little
got here giving stuff away free a little bit information here following links
bit information here following links
bit information here following links resource materials and courses developed
resource materials and courses developed
resource materials and courses developed for your personal use on your trauma
for your personal use on your trauma
for your personal use on your trauma recovery journey so now I’m a little
recovery journey so now I’m a little
recovery journey so now I’m a little confused i thought this website was
confused i thought this website was
confused i thought this website was about people who are trauma
about people who are trauma
about people who are trauma professionals helping people who have
professionals helping people who have
professionals helping people who have trauma right you have it here helping
trauma right you have it here helping
trauma right you have it here helping you help trauma survivors and then this
you help trauma survivors and then this
you help trauma survivors and then this is a series of resources for people who
is a series of resources for people who
is a series of resources for people who have trauma they’re not the professional
have trauma they’re not the professional
have trauma they’re not the professional so it’s just a little confused as to who
so it’s just a little confused as to who
so it’s just a little confused as to who your target audiences are you trying to
your target audiences are you trying to
your target audiences are you trying to target the people who have trauma or the
target the people who have trauma or the
target the people who have trauma or the people who are servicing the people who
people who are servicing the people who
people who are servicing the people who have trauma and if you’re having free
have trauma and if you’re having free
have trauma and if you’re having free information it should be around your
information it should be around your
information it should be around your customers who are the trainer’s right
customers who are the trainer’s right
customers who are the trainer’s right the people who are dealing with the
the people who are dealing with the
the people who are dealing with the people who have traumas
people who have traumas
people who have traumas might want to reject this around put a
might want to reject this around put a
might want to reject this around put a picture if you can with each one have a
picture if you can with each one have a
picture if you can with each one have a little bit more of a description so
little bit more of a description so
little bit more of a description so audio recording download you know
audio recording download you know
audio recording download you know doesn’t really tell me much about it so
doesn’t really tell me much about it so
doesn’t really tell me much about it so put a little bit more information with
put a little bit more information with
put a little bit more information with each one that you have here and then
each one that you have here and then
each one that you have here and then let’s look at some of these stories so
let’s look at some of these stories so
let’s look at some of these stories so that kind of attracted me here with this
that kind of attracted me here with this
that kind of attracted me here with this sidebar so this is great you know you
sidebar so this is great you know you
sidebar so this is great you know you have people saying great things about
have people saying great things about
have people saying great things about your business great things about working
your business great things about working
your business great things about working with your website this is a little
with your website this is a little
with your website this is a little condensed I think about breaking it up
condensed I think about breaking it up
condensed I think about breaking it up adding line breaks on here to make it
adding line breaks on here to make it
adding line breaks on here to make it easier maybe bolding the most important
easier maybe bolding the most important
easier maybe bolding the most important sentence all this because this is a huge
sentence all this because this is a huge
sentence all this because this is a huge paragraph that I wouldn’t read so pull
paragraph that I wouldn’t read so pull
paragraph that I wouldn’t read so pull out the most important quotes either cut
out the most important quotes either cut
out the most important quotes either cut down the whole thing or just bold the
down the whole thing or just bold the
down the whole thing or just bold the most important line from here and if you
most important line from here and if you
most important line from here and if you can try to put their picture so if you
can try to put their picture so if you
can try to put their picture so if you have a full name so you here we have
have a full name so you here we have
have a full name so you here we have Donna rhymer let’s see because it’s it’s
Donna rhymer let’s see because it’s it’s
Donna rhymer let’s see because it’s it’s a lot better we can have a picture of
a lot better we can have a picture of
a lot better we can have a picture of somebody so Donna rhymer is a registered
somebody so Donna rhymer is a registered
somebody so Donna rhymer is a registered nurse passion compassion fatigue
nurse passion compassion fatigue
nurse passion compassion fatigue specialist I do a search this might be
specialist I do a search this might be
specialist I do a search this might be Donna yat recipients and she’s a nurse
Donna yat recipients and she’s a nurse
Donna yat recipients and she’s a nurse this is probably her psychiatric nurses
this is probably her psychiatric nurses
this is probably her psychiatric nurses so like you got a picture here she’s
so like you got a picture here she’s
so like you got a picture here she’s smiling she’s wearing a you know
smiling she’s wearing a you know
smiling she’s wearing a you know professional outfit their use that
professional outfit their use that
professional outfit their use that picture that’s going to speak so much
picture that’s going to speak so much
picture that’s going to speak so much more to the people reading this page
more to the people reading this page
more to the people reading this page people will draw in towards a smiling
people will draw in towards a smiling
people will draw in towards a smiling face and it’s more believable so you’ve
face and it’s more believable so you’ve
face and it’s more believable so you’ve got look you’ve got like a whole page
got look you’ve got like a whole page
got look you’ve got like a whole page full of amazing testimonials but
full of amazing testimonials but
full of amazing testimonials but probably people aren’t going to read any
probably people aren’t going to read any
probably people aren’t going to read any of these things because it’s difficult
of these things because it’s difficult
of these things because it’s difficult to read nothing’s bolded there’s no
to read nothing’s bolded there’s no
to read nothing’s bolded there’s no pictures so it doesn’t draw people in
pictures so it doesn’t draw people in
pictures so it doesn’t draw people in you’ve done most of the heavy lifting
you’ve done most of the heavy lifting
you’ve done most of the heavy lifting here it’s just presenting it in a way
here it’s just presenting it in a way
here it’s just presenting it in a way that people will understand and relate
that people will understand and relate
that people will understand and relate to a lot better so that’s my quick and
to a lot better so that’s my quick and
to a lot better so that’s my quick and quick impression of the website and I
quick impression of the website and I
quick impression of the website and I hope I wasn’t too hard on you there but
hope I wasn’t too hard on you there but
hope I wasn’t too hard on you there but give you some ideas on what to do to
give you some ideas on what to do to
give you some ideas on what to do to make this thing even better and have an
make this thing even better and have an
make this thing even better and have an even greater impact for those are
even greater impact for those are
even greater impact for those are watching if you liked the video please
watching if you liked the video please
watching if you liked the video please give it a thumbs up below and I’ll do
give it a thumbs up below and I’ll do
give it a thumbs up below and I’ll do more similar videos and if you have a
more similar videos and if you have a
more similar videos and if you have a thought about this website or you have a
thought about this website or you have a
thought about this website or you have a question for your own business please
question for your own business please
question for your own business please leave in a comment section below I
leave in a comment section below I
leave in a comment section below I always read those love seeing them come
always read those love seeing them come
always read those love seeing them come in thank you guys I’ll see you on the
in thank you guys I’ll see you on the
in thank you guys I’ll see you on the next episode
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