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How to Write a Poem: Lessons in Perception and Empathy | Sharon Lin | TEDxYouth@BeaconStreet


the way a poem begins you can never tell

the way a poem begins you can never tell if the words are already written or if

if the words are already written or if

if the words are already written or if they form as you speak meaning is

they form as you speak meaning is

they form as you speak meaning is derived from ways reverberating through

derived from ways reverberating through

derived from ways reverberating through the air and gestures form from

the air and gestures form from

the air and gestures form from convenience the way a poem is structured

convenience the way a poem is structured

convenience the way a poem is structured you are supposed to question its form

you are supposed to question its form

you are supposed to question its form each word a new opportunity to learn

each word a new opportunity to learn

each word a new opportunity to learn about the craft of your choosing you

about the craft of your choosing you

about the craft of your choosing you form the canvas and the brushes your

form the canvas and the brushes your

form the canvas and the brushes your hands your sound your voice the way a

hands your sound your voice the way a

hands your sound your voice the way a poem pulses you pulse with the heartbeat

poem pulses you pulse with the heartbeat

poem pulses you pulse with the heartbeat the rythm not quite in time the rhyme

the rythm not quite in time the rhyme

the rythm not quite in time the rhyme not quite right you form the dips and

not quite right you form the dips and

not quite right you form the dips and valleys and the highest peaks of truth

valleys and the highest peaks of truth

valleys and the highest peaks of truth and you realize so to us everyone beside

and you realize so to us everyone beside

and you realize so to us everyone beside you

you

you to write a poem is to form a bond with

to write a poem is to form a bond with

to write a poem is to form a bond with the page and the person in front whose

the page and the person in front whose

the page and the person in front whose eyes become your own and whose memories

eyes become your own and whose memories

eyes become your own and whose memories become your acrylics and clay you add to

become your acrylics and clay you add to

become your acrylics and clay you add to these emotions and wisdom cherish dreams

these emotions and wisdom cherish dreams

these emotions and wisdom cherish dreams and fascinations you read other poems

and fascinations you read other poems

and fascinations you read other poems and start to wonder whether poems are

and start to wonder whether poems are

and start to wonder whether poems are written by people at all these words

written by people at all these words

written by people at all these words closer to themselves than to those of

closer to themselves than to those of

closer to themselves than to those of conversations you realize that a poem is

conversations you realize that a poem is

conversations you realize that a poem is a reaction a lesson a glance from the

a reaction a lesson a glance from the

a reaction a lesson a glance from the perspective of one apart from you to be

perspective of one apart from you to be

perspective of one apart from you to be a poet is to choose to tell and to

a poet is to choose to tell and to

a poet is to choose to tell and to present a choice it is reactionary and

present a choice it is reactionary and

present a choice it is reactionary and raw and to speak as a poet is to act a

raw and to speak as a poet is to act a

raw and to speak as a poet is to act a truth the closer to reality you bring

truth the closer to reality you bring

truth the closer to reality you bring your words the more they become your own

your words the more they become your own

your words the more they become your own you avoid cliches and one-off fits

you avoid cliches and one-off fits

you avoid cliches and one-off fits finding purpose in the original and the

finding purpose in the original and the

finding purpose in the original and the mundane you seek experiences and people

mundane you seek experiences and people

mundane you seek experiences and people and you find your craft and proves the

and you find your craft and proves the

and you find your craft and proves the more you read you believe in the art and

more you read you believe in the art and

more you read you believe in the art and the poem begins to form to write a poem

the poem begins to form to write a poem

the poem begins to form to write a poem is to imagine alternate worlds crafted

is to imagine alternate worlds crafted

is to imagine alternate worlds crafted by words you write each phrase with the

by words you write each phrase with the

by words you write each phrase with the precision of a watchmaker finding flaws

precision of a watchmaker finding flaws

precision of a watchmaker finding flaws in the pairings and triplets carving

in the pairings and triplets carving

in the pairings and triplets carving tragedies into blocks and stanzas making

tragedies into blocks and stanzas making

tragedies into blocks and stanzas making sure to space out your line so they can

sure to space out your line so they can

sure to space out your line so they can stand on their own

stand on their own

stand on their own when you release the poem begins to flow

when you release the poem begins to flow

when you release the poem begins to flow until the lines are no longer dividers

until the lines are no longer dividers

until the lines are no longer dividers but transitions from one person to the

but transitions from one person to the

but transitions from one person to the next and hands become steps from which

next and hands become steps from which

next and hands become steps from which you whisper your sorrows and regrets hi

you whisper your sorrows and regrets hi

you whisper your sorrows and regrets hi my name is Sharon Lin and this year I

my name is Sharon Lin and this year I

my name is Sharon Lin and this year I was a 2017 york city youth poet laureate

was a 2017 york city youth poet laureate

was a 2017 york city youth poet laureate for the past year my role has been to

for the past year my role has been to

for the past year my role has been to educate middle and high school students

educate middle and high school students

educate middle and high school students about creative writing and poetry as

about creative writing and poetry as

about creative writing and poetry as well as to advocate for literacy in our

well as to advocate for literacy in our

well as to advocate for literacy in our education system one problem I

education system one problem I

education system one problem I consistently encountered among emerging

consistently encountered among emerging

consistently encountered among emerging and amateur writers is a lack of

and amateur writers is a lack of

and amateur writers is a lack of confidence in putting out their work as

confidence in putting out their work as

confidence in putting out their work as a young artist myself I found it

a young artist myself I found it

a young artist myself I found it incredibly difficult sometimes to have

incredibly difficult sometimes to have

incredibly difficult sometimes to have other people critique your work but it’s

other people critique your work but it’s

other people critique your work but it’s one of the steps that’s absolutely

one of the steps that’s absolutely

one of the steps that’s absolutely crucial to developing as a creative

crucial to developing as a creative

crucial to developing as a creative individual poetry is an art form that is

individual poetry is an art form that is

individual poetry is an art form that is always changing and always has been in

always changing and always has been in

always changing and always has been in the poetry classes I’ve taken

the poetry classes I’ve taken

the poetry classes I’ve taken we’ve gone from sonnets some Shakespeare

we’ve gone from sonnets some Shakespeare

we’ve gone from sonnets some Shakespeare all the way to postmodern minimalism and

all the way to postmodern minimalism and

all the way to postmodern minimalism and even so whenever I ask my friends about

even so whenever I ask my friends about

even so whenever I ask my friends about poetry most of them just answer isn’t it

poetry most of them just answer isn’t it

poetry most of them just answer isn’t it just Emily Dickinson Edgar Allen Poe or

just Emily Dickinson Edgar Allen Poe or

just Emily Dickinson Edgar Allen Poe or some other Victorian age poet with

some other Victorian age poet with

some other Victorian age poet with eloquent phrases and flowery languages

eloquent phrases and flowery languages

eloquent phrases and flowery languages modern poetry occupies a niche that’s

modern poetry occupies a niche that’s

modern poetry occupies a niche that’s very rarely traversed in modern

very rarely traversed in modern

very rarely traversed in modern literature apart from the dedicated

literature apart from the dedicated

literature apart from the dedicated poetry community there are a few who

poetry community there are a few who

poetry community there are a few who actively engage with modern poetry and

actively engage with modern poetry and

actively engage with modern poetry and yet it contains such a rich compendium

yet it contains such a rich compendium

yet it contains such a rich compendium of opportunities to engage with

of opportunities to engage with

of opportunities to engage with perspectives apart from yours especially

perspectives apart from yours especially

perspectives apart from yours especially those pertaining to issues such as

those pertaining to issues such as

those pertaining to issues such as social justice perhaps the most

social justice perhaps the most

social justice perhaps the most interesting thing about poetry is that

interesting thing about poetry is that

interesting thing about poetry is that it’s one of very few genres of

it’s one of very few genres of

it’s one of very few genres of literature where real meaning and

literature where real meaning and

literature where real meaning and emotional meaning can be gleaned from

emotional meaning can be gleaned from

emotional meaning can be gleaned from the work even for those unfamiliar with

the work even for those unfamiliar with

the work even for those unfamiliar with the medium itself this is especially

the medium itself this is especially

the medium itself this is especially prevalent in performance and spoken word

prevalent in performance and spoken word

prevalent in performance and spoken word poetry where there’s a direct

poetry where there’s a direct

poetry where there’s a direct correlation between the effect of the

correlation between the effect of the

correlation between the effect of the poem and the audience engagement my

poem and the audience engagement my

poem and the audience engagement my personal journey as a youth poet

personal journey as a youth poet

personal journey as a youth poet laureate and a poet probably began in

laureate and a poet probably began in

laureate and a poet probably began in the later years of high school I’d

the later years of high school I’d

the later years of high school I’d always written poem

always written poem

always written poem from as early as I can remember but I

from as early as I can remember but I

from as early as I can remember but I never considered myself really

never considered myself really

never considered myself really well-versed in the media I didn’t even

well-versed in the media I didn’t even

well-versed in the media I didn’t even consider myself a writer for a long part

consider myself a writer for a long part

consider myself a writer for a long part of my life and the mere thought of

of my life and the mere thought of

of my life and the mere thought of performing something I had written on

performing something I had written on

performing something I had written on stage terrified me even so it was around

stage terrified me even so it was around

stage terrified me even so it was around senior year of high school when I signed

senior year of high school when I signed

senior year of high school when I signed up for a spoken-word competition for the

up for a spoken-word competition for the

up for a spoken-word competition for the first time I did it on a whim and I

first time I did it on a whim and I

first time I did it on a whim and I didn’t really know much about the world

didn’t really know much about the world

didn’t really know much about the world of spoken word poetry but I started

of spoken word poetry but I started

of spoken word poetry but I started watching videos of other performers

watching videos of other performers

watching videos of other performers whose names I’d gleaned from different

whose names I’d gleaned from different

whose names I’d gleaned from different chat books I’d read or ads I’d picked up

chat books I’d read or ads I’d picked up

chat books I’d read or ads I’d picked up on New York City subways I found that

on New York City subways I found that

on New York City subways I found that their level of stage presence and

their level of stage presence and

their level of stage presence and literary prodigy was something that I

literary prodigy was something that I

literary prodigy was something that I didn’t think I could ever achieve but I

didn’t think I could ever achieve but I

didn’t think I could ever achieve but I was too naive at the time to really care

was too naive at the time to really care

was too naive at the time to really care what was a more immediate issue it for

what was a more immediate issue it for

what was a more immediate issue it for me was the fact that it wasn’t enough to

me was the fact that it wasn’t enough to

me was the fact that it wasn’t enough to want to be a poet in my mind poetry and

want to be a poet in my mind poetry and

want to be a poet in my mind poetry and writing were tasks were things that only

writing were tasks were things that only

writing were tasks were things that only people with privilege and gifts could do

people with privilege and gifts could do

people with privilege and gifts could do and this is especially true because I

and this is especially true because I

and this is especially true because I came from a first generation immigrant

came from a first generation immigrant

came from a first generation immigrant family where my parents constantly told

family where my parents constantly told

family where my parents constantly told me not to pursue the arts because they

me not to pursue the arts because they

me not to pursue the arts because they were deemed impractical nevertheless the

were deemed impractical nevertheless the

were deemed impractical nevertheless the date of the performance eventually came

date of the performance eventually came

date of the performance eventually came and I found myself on stage reminding

and I found myself on stage reminding

and I found myself on stage reminding myself to focus on delivering the poem

myself to focus on delivering the poem

myself to focus on delivering the poem I’d written I spoke at length about the

I’d written I spoke at length about the

I’d written I spoke at length about the lack of asian-americans in Hollywood and

lack of asian-americans in Hollywood and

lack of asian-americans in Hollywood and later

later

later that night I found out that I had been

that night I found out that I had been

that night I found out that I had been named the New York City youth poet

named the New York City youth poet

named the New York City youth poet laureate for the year it was incredible

laureate for the year it was incredible

laureate for the year it was incredible standing alongside mahogany all brown

standing alongside mahogany all brown

standing alongside mahogany all brown ocean Vong and so many other renowned

ocean Vong and so many other renowned

ocean Vong and so many other renowned poets joined by our mutual passion for

poets joined by our mutual passion for

poets joined by our mutual passion for poetry and literature it’s perhaps for

poetry and literature it’s perhaps for

poetry and literature it’s perhaps for this reason why at poetry competitions

this reason why at poetry competitions

this reason why at poetry competitions poets are always told to gain an

poets are always told to gain an

poets are always told to gain an intimate relationship with their

intimate relationship with their

intimate relationship with their audience

audience

audience poetry is simply one of those art forms

poetry is simply one of those art forms

poetry is simply one of those art forms that benefit immensely from being able

that benefit immensely from being able

that benefit immensely from being able to express yourself through your

to express yourself through your

to express yourself through your connection with an audience it’s for

connection with an audience it’s for

connection with an audience it’s for this reason as well that so many

this reason as well that so many

this reason as well that so many different themes such as trauma

different themes such as trauma

different themes such as trauma abandonment

abandonment

abandonment and life-altering decisions are often

and life-altering decisions are often

and life-altering decisions are often most poignant in poems as a youth poet

most poignant in poems as a youth poet

most poignant in poems as a youth poet laureate I discovered that poetry can

laureate I discovered that poetry can

laureate I discovered that poetry can bring so much more than just literary

bring so much more than just literary

bring so much more than just literary and artistic merit to one’s life

and artistic merit to one’s life

and artistic merit to one’s life according to the Yale Center for

according to the Yale Center for

according to the Yale Center for emotional intelligence there’s actually

emotional intelligence there’s actually

emotional intelligence there’s actually a statistically significant positive

a statistically significant positive

a statistically significant positive correlation between conscientiousness

correlation between conscientiousness

correlation between conscientiousness emotional intelligence and academic

emotional intelligence and academic

emotional intelligence and academic success even so emotional intelligence

success even so emotional intelligence

success even so emotional intelligence isn’t something that’s taught in schools

isn’t something that’s taught in schools

isn’t something that’s taught in schools and it’s extremely underdeveloped in a

and it’s extremely underdeveloped in a

and it’s extremely underdeveloped in a lot of students having worked with

lot of students having worked with

lot of students having worked with Facebook’s inspire ed program for the

Facebook’s inspire ed program for the

Facebook’s inspire ed program for the past year I’ve also learned a lot about

past year I’ve also learned a lot about

past year I’ve also learned a lot about the importance of incorporating empathy

the importance of incorporating empathy

the importance of incorporating empathy and emotional intelligence into one’s

and emotional intelligence into one’s

and emotional intelligence into one’s education and I found that while poetry

education and I found that while poetry

education and I found that while poetry may not be a direct path towards

may not be a direct path towards

may not be a direct path towards developing empathy it’s important to

developing empathy it’s important to

developing empathy it’s important to understand how to utilize emotions both

understand how to utilize emotions both

understand how to utilize emotions both in artistic usage as well as in

in artistic usage as well as in

in artistic usage as well as in communication being able to express

communication being able to express

communication being able to express yourself and to be able to engage others

yourself and to be able to engage others

yourself and to be able to engage others in a conversation that is a true power

in a conversation that is a true power

in a conversation that is a true power of poetry thank you

of poetry thank you

of poetry thank you [Applause]

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