heights Evan Carmichael today I’m doing another one of my fiber gigs where I
another one of my fiber gigs where I
another one of my fiber gigs where I review somebody’s website give my
review somebody’s website give my
review somebody’s website give my feedback on it and showcase them on my
feedback on it and showcase them on my
feedback on it and showcase them on my youtube channel so today’s website is
youtube channel so today’s website is
youtube channel so today’s website is server cs6 teen class client su I
server cs6 teen class client su I
server cs6 teen class client su I checked it out the website is not in
checked it out the website is not in
checked it out the website is not in English and I thought I’d give it a shot
English and I thought I’d give it a shot
English and I thought I’d give it a shot so let’s load it up and see what kind of
so let’s load it up and see what kind of
so let’s load it up and see what kind of feedback we can still give even though I
feedback we can still give even though I
feedback we can still give even though I do not understand what a lot of this the
do not understand what a lot of this the
do not understand what a lot of this the wording is so this is the website Google
wording is so this is the website Google
wording is so this is the website Google lets me know that this is in Russian and
lets me know that this is in Russian and
lets me know that this is in Russian and I’ll probably translate it but let’s
I’ll probably translate it but let’s
I’ll probably translate it but let’s check it out first the design is okay
check it out first the design is okay
check it out first the design is okay there’s a lot happening i’m not quite
there’s a lot happening i’m not quite
there’s a lot happening i’m not quite sure where I should be clicking next you
sure where I should be clicking next you
sure where I should be clicking next you might want to invest into having a
might want to invest into having a
might want to invest into having a slightly better design that would
slightly better design that would
slightly better design that would attract people and quickly guide them to
attract people and quickly guide them to
attract people and quickly guide them to let them know what your next step should
let them know what your next step should
let them know what your next step should be as I scroll down here there’s a lot
be as I scroll down here there’s a lot
be as I scroll down here there’s a lot of different pictures some of them seem
of different pictures some of them seem
of different pictures some of them seem broken so no image here broken picture
broken so no image here broken picture
broken so no image here broken picture broken picture down the right side
broken picture down the right side
broken picture down the right side there’s a whole bunch more broken
there’s a whole bunch more broken
there’s a whole bunch more broken pictures so you might want to get that
pictures so you might want to get that
pictures so you might want to get that looked at see if these are important
looked at see if these are important
looked at see if these are important sections of your website or not and if
sections of your website or not and if
sections of your website or not and if they are fix up those pictures so that
they are fix up those pictures so that
they are fix up those pictures so that they can help help the people or visit
they can help help the people or visit
they can help help the people or visit in your site so let’s translate this and
in your site so let’s translate this and
in your site so let’s translate this and Google does not do a perfect job of
Google does not do a perfect job of
Google does not do a perfect job of translating but it’s better than me
translating but it’s better than me
translating but it’s better than me trying to guess what all this stuff is
trying to guess what all this stuff is
trying to guess what all this stuff is about so next I’m looking at the title
about so next I’m looking at the title
about so next I’m looking at the title tag of the page and it’s all for CS 1.6
tag of the page and it’s all for CS 1.6
tag of the page and it’s all for CS 1.6 in general you want to try to optimize
in general you want to try to optimize
in general you want to try to optimize your website maybe a little bit more
your website maybe a little bit more
your website maybe a little bit more that’s probably not much of a search
that’s probably not much of a search
that’s probably not much of a search word a search term all for CS 1.6 so I’d
word a search term all for CS 1.6 so I’d
word a search term all for CS 1.6 so I’d be a little more descriptive in your
be a little more descriptive in your
be a little more descriptive in your title tag so that you’re using your
title tag so that you’re using your
title tag so that you’re using your search engine keywords a little bit more
search engine keywords a little bit more
search engine keywords a little bit more here it says download the materials on
here it says download the materials on
here it says download the materials on the site or for all users this internet
the site or for all users this internet
the site or for all users this internet portal is designed specifically for
portal is designed specifically for
portal is designed specifically for rounds of the most popular game of all
rounds of the most popular game of all
rounds of the most popular game of all time’ nations
time’ nations
time’ nations counter-strike now again the English is
counter-strike now again the English is
counter-strike now again the English is broken here because Google is doing the
broken here because Google is doing the
broken here because Google is doing the translation so this is your call that
translation so this is your call that
translation so this is your call that this is this is your call to action kind
this is this is your call to action kind
this is this is your call to action kind of explains what it is that you do i
of explains what it is that you do i
of explains what it is that you do i would put this higher it’s not very
would put this higher it’s not very
would put this higher it’s not very visible kind of gets lost in the shuffle
visible kind of gets lost in the shuffle
visible kind of gets lost in the shuffle so if i landed on this website it
so if i landed on this website it
so if i landed on this website it wouldn’t quite know what you’re all
wouldn’t quite know what you’re all
wouldn’t quite know what you’re all about so i make this a little bit bigger
about so i make this a little bit bigger
about so i make this a little bit bigger more visible easier to understand in
more visible easier to understand in
more visible easier to understand in terms of your you know called actions
terms of your you know called actions
terms of your you know called actions i’m not quite sure what to do next looks
i’m not quite sure what to do next looks
i’m not quite sure what to do next looks like there’s a group here that looks
like there’s a group here that looks
like there’s a group here that looks like facebook but maybe it’s like a
like facebook but maybe it’s like a
like facebook but maybe it’s like a russian version of facebook there I
russian version of facebook there I
russian version of facebook there I don’t see any newsletter or way to
don’t see any newsletter or way to
don’t see any newsletter or way to convert some of your visitors so you
convert some of your visitors so you
convert some of your visitors so you want people who are coming to your
want people who are coming to your
want people who are coming to your website to not just come once and leave
website to not just come once and leave
website to not just come once and leave you want to try to hook them and so if
you want to try to hook them and so if
you want to try to hook them and so if you can sign them up for your newsletter
you can sign them up for your newsletter
you can sign them up for your newsletter offer them some kind of bonus or free
offer them some kind of bonus or free
offer them some kind of bonus or free value add and then when they you know
value add and then when they you know
value add and then when they you know they you have some kind of new update on
they you have some kind of new update on
they you have some kind of new update on your website you can let everybody know
your website you can let everybody know
your website you can let everybody know I’m bring them back to your website so
I’m bring them back to your website so
I’m bring them back to your website so let’s check out another page just look
let’s check out another page just look
let’s check out another page just look at the about this site here and see what
at the about this site here and see what
at the about this site here and see what we can find out so again I don’t
we can find out so again I don’t
we can find out so again I don’t obviously understand what this says but
obviously understand what this says but
obviously understand what this says but it’s very condensed that makes it really
it’s very condensed that makes it really
it’s very condensed that makes it really hard to read it’s good that you have
hard to read it’s good that you have
hard to read it’s good that you have some content here but it’s hard to read
some content here but it’s hard to read
some content here but it’s hard to read the font size and everything bunched
the font size and everything bunched
the font size and everything bunched together let’s translate and see what
together let’s translate and see what
together let’s translate and see what we’re talking about here 36 tips while
we’re talking about here 36 tips while
we’re talking about here 36 tips while playing CSS or counter strike so this is
playing CSS or counter strike so this is
playing CSS or counter strike so this is great that you’re offering some value
great that you’re offering some value
great that you’re offering some value out for people these 36 tips but what I
out for people these 36 tips but what I
out for people these 36 tips but what I would do is have a little bit more
would do is have a little bit more
would do is have a little bit more information about the site you know what
information about the site you know what
information about the site you know what are you offering here on the site why
are you offering here on the site why
are you offering here on the site why should people take that next step what
should people take that next step what
should people take that next step what is the next step that you want people to
is the next step that you want people to
is the next step that you want people to take
take
take so people are curious to know about your
so people are curious to know about your
so people are curious to know about your website your business and why you got
website your business and why you got
website your business and why you got started so you want to use that as an
started so you want to use that as an
started so you want to use that as an opportunity though she sent just the
opportunity though she sent just the
opportunity though she sent just the second link here on your menu that’s an
second link here on your menu that’s an
second link here on your menu that’s an opportunity to connect with people let’s
opportunity to connect with people let’s
opportunity to connect with people let’s check out one more page to see our
check out one more page to see our
check out one more page to see our forums and see what we have here in the
forums and see what we have here in the
forums and see what we have here in the forums so there’s not a lot of activity
forums so there’s not a lot of activity
forums so there’s not a lot of activity I don’t even need to translate it to see
I don’t even need to translate it to see
I don’t even need to translate it to see there’s only a few posts in general and
there’s only a few posts in general and
there’s only a few posts in general and they look like they’re from 2011 so
they look like they’re from 2011 so
they look like they’re from 2011 so stuff like this makes it look really
stuff like this makes it look really
stuff like this makes it look really dated and really old and so if I saw
dated and really old and so if I saw
dated and really old and so if I saw this as your forum I may not want to
this as your forum I may not want to
this as your forum I may not want to check out the rest of your page because
check out the rest of your page because
check out the rest of your page because it looks really outdated so I’d either
it looks really outdated so I’d either
it looks really outdated so I’d either remove the form since nobody’s really
remove the form since nobody’s really
remove the form since nobody’s really using it or make this part of your
using it or make this part of your
using it or make this part of your business and really encourage people to
business and really encourage people to
business and really encourage people to drive you know to your form and get them
drive you know to your form and get them
drive you know to your form and get them involved in it and maybe that’s
involved in it and maybe that’s
involved in it and maybe that’s something you put on your homepage make
something you put on your homepage make
something you put on your homepage make it really visible the next step is to
it really visible the next step is to
it really visible the next step is to you know join in on your forms but one
you know join in on your forms but one
you know join in on your forms but one of the other either remove it or make it
of the other either remove it or make it
of the other either remove it or make it more visible and really drive people to
more visible and really drive people to
more visible and really drive people to that page one thing I see a lot of
that page one thing I see a lot of
that page one thing I see a lot of opportunity here is to tell your story
opportunity here is to tell your story
opportunity here is to tell your story and so I haven’t seen that anywhere it’s
and so I haven’t seen that anywhere it’s
and so I haven’t seen that anywhere it’s not on the homepage it’s not on the
not on the homepage it’s not on the
not on the homepage it’s not on the about me page why did you start this
about me page why did you start this
about me page why did you start this people are interested in learning about
people are interested in learning about
people are interested in learning about who the person is behind every business
who the person is behind every business
who the person is behind every business most people like to buy from people not
most people like to buy from people not
most people like to buy from people not from companies so if you could talk a
from companies so if you could talk a
from companies so if you could talk a little bit about maybe why you like
little bit about maybe why you like
little bit about maybe why you like counter-strike so much and why you
counter-strike so much and why you
counter-strike so much and why you started this website and what you hope
started this website and what you hope
started this website and what you hope to accomplish Amadan what you want to
to accomplish Amadan what you want to
to accomplish Amadan what you want to share that’s a story that could really
share that’s a story that could really
share that’s a story that could really bring people in and make them want to
bring people in and make them want to
bring people in and make them want to take whatever that next step is with you
take whatever that next step is with you
take whatever that next step is with you maybe make a video of yourself or if
maybe make a video of yourself or if
maybe make a video of yourself or if you’re not comfortable with that just
you’re not comfortable with that just
you’re not comfortable with that just take a picture of you you know smiling
take a picture of you you know smiling
take a picture of you you know smiling or playing counter-strike or whatever it
or playing counter-strike or whatever it
or playing counter-strike or whatever it is just to add a little more personal
is just to add a little more personal
is just to add a little more personal attachment then then just what you’ve
attachment then then just what you’ve
attachment then then just what you’ve got right now so hopefully that helps
got right now so hopefully that helps
got right now so hopefully that helps always a little harder when the websites
always a little harder when the websites
always a little harder when the websites not in English but I hopeful there’s
not in English but I hopeful there’s
not in English but I hopeful there’s still some valuable feedback in there
still some valuable feedback in there
still some valuable feedback in there that you can use to make this website
that you can use to make this website
that you can use to make this website even better than it is those are
even better than it is those are
even better than it is those are watching if you liked this video and you
watching if you liked this video and you
watching if you liked this video and you found the information helpful please
found the information helpful please
found the information helpful please give it a thumbs up below it makes one
give it a thumbs up below it makes one
give it a thumbs up below it makes one to do more for you and if you have a
to do more for you and if you have a
to do more for you and if you have a comment about this website or you have a
comment about this website or you have a
comment about this website or you have a question by your own business or website
question by your own business or website
question by your own business or website feel free to leave it in the comments
feel free to leave it in the comments
feel free to leave it in the comments section below I always read those I love
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seem to come in so thank you and I’ll
seem to come in so thank you and I’ll see you on next episode
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